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;_; so sad *hugs kakashi*

thank you so much for updating! it was a great and hot chapter once again ^^

wow! what an ending!))) ibiki looking over sasuke in respect of shisui's memory...that's definitely an unexpected turn!) have i ever told you how much i love following the paths your imagination leads you...hmmm sounded stupid ^^...but, well, true...
by the end of chapter 3 i really had no ideas what to expect, but i so love the way it all turned out...iruka and izumo falling asleep cuddlimg (i mean, no one can deny those two are the cuddling types XD), kakashi being totally cunfused and ibiki being the wise ass)))...i love how you did ibiki...the way he's psychologically manipulating the others to do things his way (even if it all hasn't gone his way exactly, he still got some nice *caugh* experience with kakashi XD)))
i loved this fic...and i really can't wait to read more from you...no pressure from my shameless fangirl self, though))))

Shikyaku – I LOVE THIS CHAPTER. I love Ibiki’s skillful manipulation of Kakashi’s ego and libido AND decision-making skills, love Iruka and Izumo’s sweet, tender lovemaking, love the way Ibiki insists, and insists, but gives in anyway, love the cuddly chuunin and… oh, fucking hell, the WALL. And the… free-swaying… Oh dear god. KILLING ME WITH THE MAN SEX.

I adore how every plan but one backfired. Well, maybe two. ^_^ And the ending was beautiful, freaking perfect! I was trying to guess Ibiki’s plan through the whole thing, and I never would have guessed that. Surprising ending, but perfect.

^_^

It’s great how so many people are indirectly involved in this fic, how the threads from your stories are twining together.

Fuckverse rocks my world. I am really, REALLY looking forward to the next one.

I just wanted to say how much I truly enjoy reading your stories. I mean aside from the obvious hotness (and they are incredibly HOT)they all emotion. I find my self laughing and sighnig during each story. I go from happy, sad and so many other emotions it's hard to cataglorize. I look forward to your next story. I am hoping for some Naruto and Sasuke which I think you may have hinted at and I can't wait to see what else you do with Shikamaru (my favorite) and Ibiki.,

Thanks for sharing your writing
purplelev

Wow. Chapter 4 was fantastic. I absolutely loved Ibiki's plan - Ibiki is a genius. Loved that Izumo and Iruka "made love" and that Ibiki and Kakashi fucked. And yeah Ibiki we believe you when you say that you don't "like men" (yeah right, just like I don't like men). Thanks for a wonderful story and hope to see more from you soon.

I like it I really do. I've only read some of your fics in the line mostly the ones that involve Iruka. I love uke Iruka and the emotioness that is him. And while I do like the Kakashi/Iruka pairing Kakashi makes me very angry in your fics O_O He's a total horny jerk and doesn't deserve someone like Iruka. I like this fic cuz it's nice to see Iruka attempting to get some back bone but on the other hand it bothers me that everyone is in on trying to change him and his views. I just hate the feeling of him being manipulated and helpless. Though I like that you choose Izumo for Iruka's little experience he seems the less harmless out of the rest and someone that Iruka can relate too in a way. I just can't help but hope Kakashi gets some kind of punishment for being the selfish bastard he is >_< Great fic you're making me go through so many emotions and also keeping it juicy with the citrus ^_^

god, that was an amazingly hot chapter! *drool*...i so loved all the small details and insinuations))) ok, i'll try to organise my chaotic thoughts right now...

kakashi - it seems he's discovering a brand new feeling, seeing the person who belonged to him only, who had always been a strong supporter of monogamy, getting so expertly sucked by one of his friends (who hasn't ever sucked kakashi himself before XD)))...what could this be...hmmm jealousy?...

iruka - well, i'm glad he finally got rid of that stick up his ass and is now discovering the pleasure of cheating XD))) as a matter of fact, i think, iruka's cheating even more, that kakashi has ever did to him...people don't usually make impersonal sex (or oral sex) so emotional or intimate (with all those tender touches and kisses)...just my thought, but it's no wonder, kakashi's feeling kind of uncomfortable...i don't think he has ever been so close with his *caugh* partners)))

izumo - god, how i loved that freaky littly exhebitionist! hoping to get more public, throwing glances at kakashi, while pleasuring iruka...he IS a perfect person for that complicated plan)))

shikamaru - damn! i loved that piece...i knew, shikamaru was a real pervert behind that lazy and indifferent exterior XD)))

ibiki - yeah, who's the smart ass here))) it feels like he's going to fulfill his own best laid plans with those three confused shinobi)))

god, you're amazing as always! i loved, loved, LOVED it!))) even though i'm going through an iruka-hating phase XD...but i love the way you put all the characters! can't wait to read the next chapter...
love!

OMG That was fucking HAWT.

UPDATE SOON KTHXBYE

*Squirms in seat* Oh I love this! I love what you've done with the characters. I don't know why people get so bent out of shape if you don't adhere to the 'canon' I take the view that the characters are like actors, and fanfic allows you to cast them in whatever role you want to see them play. And, just because you like certain actors, certain character roles or certain situations doesn't mean you can't open your mind to new posibilities. Anyway, I love Shikamaru in this chapter. And Jealous!Kakashi is nice too. He's finally getting a taste of his own medicine.

I'm still a bit confused about the Sasuke thing. Did Kakashi and Sasuke have something going before Sasuke defected to Sound (I think that's right)? If so, when did Sasuke tell Kakashi to figure things out? Is Kakashi still hooking up with him on the sly? And what does the tape Iruka gave Kakashi have to do with Sasuke leaving?

Shik, you rock my world everytime...Kakashi is such a bad bad boy. He needs a good whipping. I think I see where this is headed and it serves Kakashi right. It is my sincere goal to one day be able to write smut like you--very artistically written. I so love everything you write. Voyeuristic static--heh. You have made Izumo into one loveable perverted little character. Sweeeet.