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Oh no! Iruka didn't even make it to the next day without being found. And what is Kakashi going to say about Iruka and Izumo kissing? Will he be mad? Jealous? Turned on? Poor Iruka. He's going to have a hangover, regrets, and a failed plan in the morning.

(About your invit to y!, I can't get into the site. It won't let me because I have spyware, or so it says. I'm missing out on such great art too!)

Argh! Cliffy!
I love Iruka!!!! I bet he'd be really hot with Izumo.
That was so hot when they were grinding their crotches *nosebleeds all over*
I was hoping they'd go all the way but damn Kakashi had to show up!
j/k, this is a really good fic so far, and I'm tense to find out what happens next!
I've been readin your other fics but I haven't left a review yet o_o
but I just wanted to leave a review this time to tell you I really like the story in this one,
even if their not having sex yet.
It's really interesting.
Great chapter and I hope you update soon!
sara

I nearly jumped.. lol GOD ... to end this chapter at such a moment... mean! XD

So.. Kakashi and Ibiki are behind all this? hmmm
Good idea to describe their grinding and kissing the way you wrote about it. It's different and refreshingly new. ^^ And very enjoyable.

Does it make sense? no? Yes? ^ ^ ah, well. Doesn't matter really, mh? ^^

This story is so hot (and so interesting). Looking forward to the next update.

now...that totally helped me survive the lack of nicotine tonight))) this is such a positive fic, i loved the irony you put into it...the getting-drunk-and-feeling-all-friendly-and-stuff (special emphasis on the word "stuff") scenes were just hillarious...so real and funny at the same time))) i practically laughed my ass off reading the drunken-conversations part)))
haha kakashi and ibiki came up with a really cruel plan, after all...or is there something else coming up?...can't wait to read what happens next..damn kakashi! i actually started drooling over izumoxiruka already/// but well, iruka also has to learn some things about freedome of choice in what concerns personal matters)))
this is really great))) i love your writing so much))) always makes me smile like dumb...or almost cry like a retard)))

Okay, I haven't read this one yet, but I am going to in the next few hours, but I just had to give a word of encouragement. I read the little notes at the bottom of the page, and dude! Your writing is a freaking art form, and it inspires me probably as much if not more than anything I've ever read! This stuff is not easy to write, people think smut, oh any fool can write smut, but it's not true, it takes a special gift to be able to write it and make it where people can become part of it like any excellent storytelling. You have the gift. Hey, anyone who makes you feel like crap about ANY of your stories, they don't know what the hell they are talking about...your stories ROCK period. That's my personal opinion, if it counts for anything. I will review the story after I read it, but I can already tell you I will give it a RAVE REVIEW!!!!

*shakes head* I KNEW sooner or later Iruka was bound to hit his limits. NO one likes being taken for granted! *muses* SO when and what will be Kakashi's reaction when he do figure out Iruka's plan? *winces* But you do realize that plans like Iruka's might back-fire on him...At least Iruka's not planning on making Kakashi jealous...

Wow, only one chapter in and I'm desprete for more. What on earth is Ibiki doing though? Oh and do whatever you want with the characters, after all that's the whole point of fanfiction isn't it? As long as there's a semi happy end I've got no complaints. (Unless you write another fic later to make up for a sad ending.)

Hmmmm?

What's Ibiki up to? Is it going to help 'ruka in the end?
Are you going to involve Ibiki in your konoha-swinger-society? XD (AND poor ruka..)
And how much drinks did he have? I lost count..

Such strange coincidences.. i'll just wait for the answers then. : )

Yay! The Shikyaku that I know and love is BACK!

I'm glad to see Iruka trying to take charge of his situation - it makes him seem like much less of a victim to Kakashi's... philandering ways (if you can even apply that word to man-on-man (-on-man-on-man...))

His jealous knee-jerk reaction when Izumo touched him was great - well, not great like it made me happy, but great like it felt true to read in an uncomfortable sort of way. And oh, I do love a tipsy Iruka. ^_^ And how he felt the need to share his appreciation for Ibiki's friendship. And how Izumo got all happy when he heard Ibiki use dirty language.

I'm not sure if I trust Ibiki... actually, I know I don't. But I guess I'll see if he's being shady with good intentions, or if he has planned a darker plan for Iruka. ^_^ And I'm wondering... who was in the trees?!?!?

(I'm also wondering what Kakashi has on those tapes that are even private to him... heh, I'm missing the *drool* emoticon)

Great chapter! I'm so curious where you're going to go with this!