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September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i wz laughing all the way through that last paragraph XD and i luved the idear of having wolfs as his summons because it just seems to fit with Raven :P i also should congratulate u on the fact that you dont have many vocabullary or spelling mistakes which alot of authors round here so good job :) keep it up
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start. I can't wait to read more.
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September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like whre ur goin with this story so keep it up :P by the way i think the 3rd hokage became hokage at the age of 14/15 but it really doesn't matter :):):)
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September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this looks promising so dnt stop now :D i cant wait 4 the nxt chapter soooooooooo plz make it soon :P