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by Rosebud

person Rennasakura
schedule February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Itachi timing is perfect... ahahha I think I know where that Flame come from
schedule March 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! If there's one thing I like more than Sasuke getting his pride trampled on, it's Sasuke getting his pride trampled on... followed by incestual gay buttsecks. You have won my love, kind sirmadam.

There were a few spelling/grammar mistakes here and there, but other than that, I don't think I have any complaints... Though a continuation would be great. I'd love to know who sent the flame! (Maybe I'm just being dense, but I can't figure it out...)

Again I say, nice work!
schedule February 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it. You are one of my favorite authors on here!
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
interesting *hands out kunai shaped cookies*
person AHH
schedule November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YOU ARE SO AMAZING the sex scene is a bit brutal I have to say, it made me wince. But cute plot ^^
person Xenobia
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
One question: who the hell flamed Sasuke to get that kind of animalistic rage?

Xenobia
person Anon
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this. was. hot. (even if I have to admit that I really thought Red Jutsu was Itachi, but oh well^.^)

are you sure you don't want to write new chapters? because I would be very happy if you did!

bye
person Octavia
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omfg
that was the most retardist thing i've ever read
JK JK JK!!!!!
lol
that was good
it'd be cool if you added another chapter
i'd very much like to read it
:]
but since you made it a one-shot i wont get my hopes up
LOL
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love you. and the image of Itachi stuffing Sasuke's ass with his cock. Oh man.

person kocoum
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
have my baaabbbyyyy!!!! i know ya wanna ;)