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by Glenndolyn

person cantthnk
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So sick so good. Thank you
person Vesca
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This one was kinda creepy... but nicely written.
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, darker than the other drabbles, but equally as enjoyable.
You wrote it wonderfully, to the point where I can't decide who I feel sorry for more- Naruto or Iruka...
And gods, it put me in a bad mood with Sasuke.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, that one was scary. i did NOT see that coming. naru-chan went crazy, though that's sort of understandable. only so much shit you can take, right? this one was disturbing, but i still liked it.~
person eve4mem
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love the angst in this fic. There isn't enough Naruto/Iruka out there and there is even less dark Naruto/Iruka. It's a shame this is a oneshot but you make it work. Though that doesn't stop me from wishing you might continue something among this line ^_^
person llyoung
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Disturbing but very well written.
All your stories are well written and I enjoy reading them. Whenever I see a new story by you (or an update)it makes me very happy and go read the story immediately.
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn!!! that sucks but it was still good.