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for You Cannot See Love

by omgitsgwen

person Califa
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A Good story so far...

...plot seems to have a good one in the works, I'm majorly into it and Yes I want to see an update!!!

And I aslo want to see some Naruto/Kiba lemon love cos it sounds really hot (As they're friends I think they should have drunken sex and/or casual sex cos it sounds very fun and hot to me.)
person Dragon7
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
person Catsura
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
still awesome! Great idea on the piercing thing!
person hisoka
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHO WOULDNT BE PISSED WHEN YOURE TOO SMART FOR SCHOOL,HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON
person Stacy
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love school fics!
just think of all the wonderful places where sasuke could
take advantage of cute little naruto!
i so can't wait!!
person Rosebud
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really cute fic. I love it. XD
I hope you get the rest of the chapter up soon, cause I want to read more! ^^
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe how cute, was waiting for sasuke to stab him in the face or something when naruto touched his knee :P, hope you continue soon, i really want to see how they interact when they meet again
person hisoka
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IS THAT REALLY HOW THEY PERCE YOUR LIP?I HATE NEEDLES TOO, WHEN EVER I GO TO THE DOCTOR MY BROTHER MAKES IT WORSE FOR ME BY SCREAMING WHEN HE GETS SHOTS SO I FREAK OUT THE DOCTORS USUALLY HALF TO HOLD ME DOWN SO I CAN GET MY SHOTS*SIGH*IM PATHETIC SOMETIMES.HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON THIS IS COOL AND WELL WRITEN
person leanne
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am curious to read onward becuase the setting is different and it would be rather amusing to see what will happen when Naruto suddenly has to deal with a transfer studen, Sasuke. I think you are doing fine as for a beta, I think you will find one on this site where it says beta.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh goodie! another good story.. [^_^]