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for Soul Mission

by Ordained

person limonata
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved the Sai chapter. Eh heh heh...ghost sex. And painting nudie Naruto on a public building. I also loved your intro, where Naruto's in the middle of the room narrating to himself in his "outside voice".

And now for something completely different: You actually like Akabane? That guy's head is screwed six ways to Sunday, you do realize. Now Kazuki, on the other hand...I'd hit it. In all its (his...ish?) androgynous glory. Or Ban or Ginji. Or BOTH. I mean...never mind. Can you tell I've gotten to the 'caffeinated' part of insomnia this morning? Anyways, write some Get Backers, if you ever find the time. It would be made of WIN, Epic Win, I can tell right now.

P.S.- You need to change "Somebodies got to do it" to "Somebody's got to do it" in the summary. I'm begging you, its lashing into my soul. The bad kind of lashing.
Ja!
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just want you to know that after reading the chapter with Sai, I was laughing so hard out loud that my brother had to knock on my door to find out just was was so goddamn funny. =^^= hehehehe

good job!
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fluffy chap! Real cute! thanks for updating!
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude this fic is all kinds of awesome. really entertaining. especially chap 4. sai is so frickin' cool even as a ghost. looking foward to your next update.
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such an original idea. I giggled the whole time through the intro. Hilarious! I love your style.
person zeroharm
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
have to say this is probably the strangest Naruto fanfic I have ever read. I have seen this posted for a few days, but kept on fighting the urge to read it despite a definite draw from the unique sounding summary. Once I sat down and read it though, I thought it was very well written, and the look at the AU characters and their interactions were interesting. Finally, for some reason, I found the disclaimer "I don't own naruto or blues clues" to be strangely entertaining. I couldn't stop laughing for the better part of a minute. Best crossover reference since I saw a StarTrek/Winnie the Pooh one :-)
person gaara89
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good. sad...you write sorrow very well. i'll look forward for the next update.
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story...It's different. I like it please update soon!
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked the interaction between Naruto and Kiba. Funny stuff. So is Naruto supposed to be like Harry Dresden?
person gaara89
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon. This is turning out really good.