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April 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL!
I have actually recently been reading some Japanese translations, and you're right. It is like n/c with an, "I really actually wanted it but couldn't tell you at the time" kind of thing. XD
Loved it nonetheless. ;) ~ Jelp
I have actually recently been reading some Japanese translations, and you're right. It is like n/c with an, "I really actually wanted it but couldn't tell you at the time" kind of thing. XD
Loved it nonetheless. ;) ~ Jelp
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh man. I really like the way your mind works. ...Even if the love confessions are really weird. I think if you end it with something like that you should have started it with something like sneaky looks or something. Like...
"Sasuke looked up from his papers and his black eyes met the blue eyes of one of his students. So Naruto had decided to show up today?" yadda, yadda, incorporate something about how he thought it was a shame Naruto turned up so rarely and throw in an excuse like how Naruto wasn't as stupid as he tended to pretend (or something) just so they have some kind of history, you know? So it's not like they don't know each other at all and then slam bam "I love you" XD
But either way. Man. You write good smut *_* I really do like the non-con with consent you write XD So hot.
"Sasuke looked up from his papers and his black eyes met the blue eyes of one of his students. So Naruto had decided to show up today?" yadda, yadda, incorporate something about how he thought it was a shame Naruto turned up so rarely and throw in an excuse like how Naruto wasn't as stupid as he tended to pretend (or something) just so they have some kind of history, you know? So it's not like they don't know each other at all and then slam bam "I love you" XD
But either way. Man. You write good smut *_* I really do like the non-con with consent you write XD So hot.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit you got the style down to an art form
THat was a very random PWP but enjoyable non-the-less, where ever you came up with the showerhead idea, pure genius!!
Wouldn't mind reading another of your PWP's, good work, very interesting Student/Teacher thing.
THat was a very random PWP but enjoyable non-the-less, where ever you came up with the showerhead idea, pure genius!!
Wouldn't mind reading another of your PWP's, good work, very interesting Student/Teacher thing.
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
brilliant, scanlation style eh....i think you have something.
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm starting to see a theme in your stories
and I like it (the theme)
:D
good work, lovey!
and I like it (the theme)
:D
good work, lovey!
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January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg HOT!!! More please :)
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE,IT WASNT REALLY RAPE WAS IT.DID HE JUST COME UP WITH THAT NAME AND WHEN DID NARUTO FIGURE OUT SASUKES FIRST NAME,PROBLY DURING INTRODUCTIONS NE.WAS NICE CRAZY PUNISHMENT FOR A TAKEN MAGAZINE
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Behind the cruel act, there's luv-luv. ;)
The ending was really sweet. I like the other gentle side shown by
Naruto at the end of story.
The ending was really sweet. I like the other gentle side shown by
Naruto at the end of story.
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, a lot of doujinshi has plots like that huh? I personally don't like the n/c stuff too much but this was cool for what it was. I'd like to read another anyway!
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October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* wow, that as a side of Naruto I thought I'd never see...but still it was a good read. Short, to the point and perfectly smut-tacular! lol, its interesting to see writers try something a bit different from their usual style and it usually is a surprise, such as with this fic.
Great :)
Ezzy
Great :)
Ezzy