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for Sakura's Nightmare

by Generation

person Connie
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey sweetie!!! I actually didn't puke when reading this story. It was amusing and funny. Finally, someone made Sakura look crazy like she is!!! It's your only story in which there isn't a false statement of sexual activity. Well crafted and interesting.
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was...interesting. I would like to see a sequel to this or something...you had me going there for a minute. There were some things unstated, some loose ends that need to be tied. The ending was far too short, and I'm sure anyone would want to know more. Why was it, out of everything that she could have had delusions about, that they were bugs? Plus, that dream, was a double-dream as well. Both the asylum and her going home before that. The whole rape with Shino needs to be addressed as well. This could develop into something more, but I won't press you. This was intended to be a one-shot, so if that's how you want it to remain, then so be it. I will be posting my seventh chapter of my longest story soon.
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was.... odd.
person Anon
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Well I thought that was very entertaining. Poor Sakura...no one believed her...
I couldn't stop laughing when they described Lee's death. I love Lee but I just thought it was funny.
Good story. :3
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um yea that was gross