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for Personal Trainer

by Hen

person Fox_Trot
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yah! I love it. I cannot wait to read the next chapter. Hurry and put it up.
person Word_Slave
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do so love this story. And I think you'll be great with the Lemon! I can't wait. (sigh) I'm not exactly know as a patient person. So, um, please soon!
Slave
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. This chan is HOOKED!
person Kristal
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really happy with this fanfic. Like some of the other reviewers said, I'v seen some with similar set ups, but none of them have been this well written and sweet. I'm really looking forward to the next chapters. <3 I love all the interpretations of the characters. I will await eagerly :3
person Shinigami24
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*muses* Pretty good so far! *lits up* A KakaIru lemon next week? Alright! Good luck, and hope you don't get caught writing! I have to hide my love of yaoi from my religious relatives...*shudders and look around warily*
person Anon
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that Kakashi told Iruka he's not really ugly. Please continue!!!
person ricemice
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the story so far is relly lovely and sweet
keep working please :)))))))))
person Kerrisa
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay for updates!! Its about time it got through Iruka's head that he's not ugly! Stupid small town people >_< But wooo!! I'mma be look for an udate next week! You said so! You said!! LolGood luck with writing the lemon, i'm sure you'll do marvelous! =D Keep up the fantabulous work xD *glomps*
person witness2crime
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*swoons* <3
person Vesca
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looking forward to happy training XD