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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wah!!! this was well written with lovely descriptions/details, and nice run through of the plot. so happy to see no glaring mistakes in grammar! it looks so promising. this was also a terrible cliffhanger! i hope that there is an update very soon! thanks for sharing your work and i look forward to the next chapter!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Mmm. Nummy.
I confess, I was kind of skeptical that this was going to be any good, because I've seen similar situations to this done, and they didn't turn out that great, but you've done a great job so far, I'm really pleased. :D
Hee hee hee, Tsunade as a madam really fits, and I liked Shizune and Genma's positions and characters. ^^ I look forward to that sexy, lazy ass Kakashi finally showing up!
I confess, I was kind of skeptical that this was going to be any good, because I've seen similar situations to this done, and they didn't turn out that great, but you've done a great job so far, I'm really pleased. :D
Hee hee hee, Tsunade as a madam really fits, and I liked Shizune and Genma's positions and characters. ^^ I look forward to that sexy, lazy ass Kakashi finally showing up!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh you've struck gold here i am pleased to tell you that i am now a fan-girl. i love the concept i love iruka and your writing stile is a refreshing change from some people who seem to be completely illiterate. i mean my spelling isn't the best but hey i can write a sentence. grreat job and pleas continue.
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh... i like your story so far. ^^ Though i was a bit dissapointed when your first chapter ended and there wasn't a "next one" to read on and on.. ^^
I really hope you will add genma to later chapters. ^_^ He's so cool. And i'm really curious how kakashi will begin irukas training.
I really hope you will add genma to later chapters. ^_^ He's so cool. And i'm really curious how kakashi will begin irukas training.
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved your story! XD can't wait for updates!!!
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! I am looking forward to more chapters, please don't disappoint me. It would make me cry and you wouldn't want that on your conscience, would you?
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm not sure if I feel bad or happy for Iruka.
I hope he doesn't have too hard a time...
Unless it hot, then make it difficult! ;)
I hope he doesn't have too hard a time...
Unless it hot, then make it difficult! ;)
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay... Where's the next chapter....(taps foot. You're awfully good at this cliffie thing....) Um more please
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Is hooked* Looking forward to the next chapter ^_^
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October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really an interesting story to read. I liked it a lot ^^