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by Hen

schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo, the begining sounds so interessting so far. I think I am going to really like this story. Please continue, because I am actually looking forward to what happens next.

Cruel_Lust
person .:Ik:.
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story! :D This is one of the first story's I ever read on adultff wich actually has something like a plot in it. :D And I like it. Also I think you can write verry well :P :D
person ayan
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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OMG Christ, It's been a long time since I've started a good story like this, and although the enitre brothel thing has been done before, I liek yours the best still. If you stop in the middle, I swear, my yaoi-fan girl ghost will come and haunt you..

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