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by Koji

person exo88
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*drooooool* uhmmmhmm... hawt... *drooool*

krhm, sorry...

THANK YOU SO MUCH! ...or MUSH, whichever suits you better. No one has ever dedicated ANYTHING to me and I think I almost cried when I saw that! Thank you so much!!!!!!!!1!!!11!!!1eighteen

I'm gonna answer your review in my next chapter, but the important notice first: I missed you too!

OH god, the biting... so hot... I'm a puddle of goo right now, and my cheeks are all red and... oh my gooooodness, that was... amazing. OOOOH! AND THE:

"I said," Sasuke began, a sharp twist to the sensitive flesh interjecting for added effect, "as much noise as you can fucking make...and I know it's way more than that..." he said softly.

A dominating Sasuke is all I live for in this world. And a dominating Naruto. Not to mention an uke Naruto... and an uke Sasuke. Okay, I love both of them in general. ...both of them together, that is... And I'm rambling!!!

Anyways, I'm having an idea of a oneshot with Shika as the main character, cos like you said earlier, he deserves his own world. So I might, you know, dedicate it to someone who has made my day, on so many occasions. Just a heads up ;P

p.s. Love ya!!!
person nm1716
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You did a great job on this. Can't wait to read your next updates. This was HOT, HOT, HOT. I love it. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON.
person FatherG
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I am a fanfiction.net writer, which is hard enough maintaining with my psycho, control-freak parents. But I must say, this is a hell of a story and changes my outlooks on all Naruto/Sasuke stories. I mean WOW! THIS IS AMAZING! I am envious of your excellence skills, me being a fanboy who will not feed you to the rabid fan-girls. I have a request, seeing this story is so good. Would you be interested in writing a Kiba/Naruto story? It is by far, my favorite couple, because Kiba's hotness and Naruto's angelic, adorablness. Thank you again for giving me such a good story to read, I actually have it in my binder and read it at school when I get bored, now to hide this arousal....
person guitarguy314
schedule December 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the best naruto fetish fic i've read in a long time...please keep writing...please?
schedule December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome sorry. Very hot.
=)
person Kayo
schedule December 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet! I am so glad you decided to do series of this! I thought it was intense when it was a oneshot, and now it's even better. And that first one! Gah! I squealed like a fangirl, it was so hawt, and just so...idk, the ending. It was better than great. And the Kiba/Shika was good too, even though I'm not even too much into them. The other Sasu/Naru was good, but I'm still a little confused why Sasuke wanted Kakashi to watch. So naruto would find out and get mad? You said so he wouldn't think about questioning him ever again? Was that in reference to the beginning part of number three? Mmm, either way, still good, but the first is definately my favorite. Ja! And keep up the great work!
person exo88
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
...hawt...

just hawt. Can't really figure out anything else to say. I'm supposed to be studying but NO. I just had to read this one and now I'm pretty sure I'm unable to concentrate xP

anyways... oh god, the smexyness. I need some ice water, I seriously do. I can't... ...maybe I should read it again, then I'd be able to say something, right?

I'd love to be dominated by Sasuke, any day!

anyway, thank you, that was a pleasant experience, you keep writing these, mmkay? ...though I suppose you'd have to have a certain mood to write this... nevertheless, I enjoyed it!

And loved it! I'm gonna read it again, that's how much I loved it! Ja!
person lilly
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This Story Rockz!! But, I Want More Sasunaru!!! MORE Plz!!! T-T
person AerieTigre
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what kinks you toss into other pairings, then~
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot! I'm glad you decided to make this a series, there aren't enough BDSM naruto stories out there