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Fetish

By: Koji
folder Naruto › Yaoi - Male/Male
Rating: Adult ++
Chapters: 3
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Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, nor any of the characters from it. I do not make any money from the writing of this story.
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Punishment - Sasu/Naru

Hey all...just so y'all know, this is my very very first EVER Sasu/Naru fic.

Never written them ever before, not in any way, shape or form. So...I appologise profusely in advance if it deeply offends anyone. I'm reallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreallyreally sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(By the way...I only called it Rumour cos I was listening to Miyavi at the time and I couldn't think of anything...)

Seriously though...aw fuck it...

Just read and see what you think...

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"S...Sasuke...please!!" Naruto whined, tugging harshly against the binds on his wrists, which yanked his arms up above his head securely against the wall.

Sasuke considered him for a moment before making his decision.

"No. You can't come yet," he said with a tone of finality. Naruto let out an enraged yell of anguish. He'd been about to orgasm for nearly an hour and a half. But still, Sasuke didn't let up, refusing to give his 'toy' release.

Not that he hadn't have any input so far. Oh no, he'd teased, baby. Teased Naruto so mercilessly that he wasn't even sure of who he was anymore. He could barely tell fingertips from tongues; every touch was just as antagonisingly sadistic.

"Please!! I'm begging you!" he cried, feeling a hand run slowly up his inner thigh. It was the one wearing the silk glove, he knew that much. Good, at least his sense of touch wasn't on complete melt-down.

Scratch that, he was wrong.

Taking it really quite litterally, three slightly sharpened nails raked his skin in the same place the silk had been caressing just moments ago. He let out a soft scream, not sure if he could last much longer.

But Sasuke said he wasn't allowed to come yet. And he didn't want to come without permission. Not again, especially after last time.

It wasn't often they played these games, and they usualy varied in content. Sometimes they would dress up for each other, or role-play. A couple of times they had sneaked outside and leaned against walls of various people houses simply for the hell of it.

Naruto had always known that Sasuke had a thing for BDSM, and eventually discovered that he secretly had a kink for it too. Though he wasn't sure if he'd ever make such a great dominatrix as Sasuke did. He might try one day, however...once he got over his adoration of being completely owned.

Just then he felt something trail up his leg. A thin, sturdy, familiar something which he both dreaded and anticipated.

"You're spacing out...do I need to hit you?" There was a warning tone in Sasuke's deepened voice, husky and dangerous, and it served well to mask his excitement. Naruto's heart skipped a thudding beat as he felt the whip tap his outer thigh gently in warning. He swallowed and gasped, feeling Sasuke drag it up over his chest to his mouth where it settled between his teeth. He bit down obediently, flashing a challenging glance to Sasuke's eyes when he felt a tug. He didn't let go however, and let his head be jerked forwards, Sasuke's face closing in slowly on him. "I asked you a question, dobe," he said softly, malice lacing every syllable. Naruto took a ragged breath, unclenching his teeth from around the leather of the crop but keeping his face hung just as close.

"Yes...you do need to hit me..." he breathed, trying and failing to control his panting. A spark flickered in Saskue's dark eyes; it could have been excitement, or anger, Naruto couldn't be sure. He did, however, know for a fact that he was about to be hurt beyond his wildest dreams. Sasuke knew he liked it rough, and constantly attempted to push Naruto's boundaries until the blond wasn't able to take anymore.

Naruto may have more stamina than him for battles, but nobody beats Uchiha Sasuke when it comes to sex. He'd make damn sure of that.

"Oh...I know I do..." he growled, one hand fisted in blond hair, keeping Naruto's eyes burning into his own. Then it came.

That crashing, searing flash of sharp, undiluted pain that he'd been craving. The rod sunk into his leg, burning his skin and reddening the area.

It came down again before he had time to recover, making him scream a muffled cry of pained ecstasy. Sasuke's eyes flashed a for a moment before grabbing Naruto's shoulder with his free hand and twisting him round to face the wall, his arms bending in an almost inhuman way to keep from dislocating themselves.

"You're so, so naughty, dobe..." he sneered in is pet's ear, the whip slicing through the skin of Naruto's backside with an almighty force, powered by Naruto's own cries of delight, egging Sasuke on to hurt him more and more, pushing them both to their limits.

"Sa-Sasuke..." he tried weakly. This earned him another whack, this time centered in between his legs as opposed to the cheek. He yelled a half-protest, smacking himself into the wall and biting his lip.

"Are you asking me to stop?" his master asked. Naruto cursed himself.

No, of course he didn't. But he didn't know how much longer he could hold out; he was on the brink of sweet oblivion, as he had been for ages now. So, if Sasuke kept going, he would come without command, and then he'd be in real trouble. But it just felt so good...

"I asked a fucking question," Sasuke reminded him, stepping back slightly to lash at Naruto's back harshly. He yelped again.

"Y-yes...stop...please..." he begged, trying to look over his shoulder at him, but Sasuke's hand flew up and pressed his face to the wall forcefully, leaving Naruto's breath shallow.

"Did I say you could look at me? Well...I suppose I'm feeling generous today...I'll stop on one condition..." he said, pressing himself up against the bound boy, breathing directly in his ear.

"Anything..." Naruto whispered back, chest heaving under his burning gasps of air. He felt Sasuke smirk on his ear, albeit faintly.

"Come..."

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How was that?? Did I just completely destroy the entire population of Sasu/Naru lovers?

Are people gonna hunt me down and kill me? Or worse, feed me alive to a bunch of rabid, angry fan-girls?! I know that'd be just awful, being that I am one myself...

Please don't kill me!!! I swear I'll get better...like I said, first time writing these two so I'm not used to them yet!!!!

Leave your thoughts in that wee box down there and I'll post something else if I survive :S

xxx
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