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for Time to Fly

by Nahima

schedule January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow, it's a really interesting twist you've got here. naruto leaving i can understand, and i like that hinata demands to go too. it just seems alittle odd that he's reluctant to leave suna... but then the story's just beginning.

can't wait for more!
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That is weird. Naruto would not leave Konoha because of Jiraya getting muredered... There has to be something more to it. But I could see Naruto going awol but they all should know that Jiraya was his only real friend who did a lot of things for him.. Even though Jiraya is a pervy sage... Hope to see more writings from you