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for Without You

by Nickname

schedule February 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this one so much and I really can't tell why, can quite put my finger on it. Maybe it's the way that you described, i, just those few words, all the pain, terror, love-hurt, and desparation that you can ever imagine. The song lyrics inhance the mental imaging and tug at the emotions. Masterfully done. Of course, you could throw more onto the fic, but I think it's perfectly wonderful the way it it. Awesome. Very.
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. I think I might cry along with him. But this can't really be complete, can it? Please tell me this is a series of some sort. T_T

Anyways, I really liked it. Nice job. ^^ (please write more? XD) heh
person cynaga
schedule November 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
perfect use of the song - very moving!
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my. You simply must continue this as a series. I read it and I was like "WHOA" which is a feat within itself (seeing as not many stories can me like "WHOA". So please, please, continue this. Or I just might be forced to make Bob torture you with the unmentionables.... WHIPPED CREAM AND FEATHERS.

Hopefully it won't come to that =D

Love You A Bunches
Sara