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for The Pants of Prevelance

by chibizoe

schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love Ibiki, Iruka is a good match for him, but I think you needed to expand more on Iruka's character... and the conclusion was a bit abrupt, but a great story. Thanks!
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROFL! I love how Iruka handled that with the gift. *still snickering* I have to remember that line. Bravo!
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This recieved an audible "Awe" from me.
This is a very rare and unusual thing.
This is most definately a compliment.
I was intrigued by the story, sucked in and spit out without the hardcore PWP I'd expected but totally satisfied none the less.
person Hen
schedule January 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This isn't usually one of my pairings but luckily I read it anyway. It was really good! Very well-written.
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! That "whole wardrobes for his temper" line was perfect. I have an Iruka/Ibiki brewing but it's not this well done. It's a good pairing!