rate_review Reviews

God, this was amazing. I would have loved it---despite the angst--even if you had left the first chapter like you planned because it was a beautiful story with a touching ending. But the second part, I adored as well. Just the connection you made between the two generations of people, same ideals (like the hand shake and acceptance) and just hints of the show--even Orochimaru's arm was pure genius. And you write so effortlessly.

And both Oro and Ji's pain without each other--so unbearable. I really wished it wouldn't have turned out that way but for it not to, would've really taken away from the story. I usually try not to see that, but in this story it was inevitable because it's what makes the story.

I also love the way Naruto reads Sasuke who thinks he's just a blubbering idiot who wears his emotions on his sleeve---I just saw it that way as well, Naruto having the upper hand in both their unique characteristics. Just always playing the fool for Sasuke's benefit. And the striking resemblance was clearly made in this chapter, LOVED IT! What you've got is amazing already, but if you plan to continue, I just hope Sasuke and Naruto get a better ending.

Or that Ji and Oro get a happier chance

This was awesome. I think it would be cool to write sequel to this. Like what happens between Naruto and Sasuke.
This was a very cool story. Very interesting pairing, but it work great.
=)

interesting and tragic

omgosh! so cute! and sad! But at least Oro really cared for Jiriya...Thank you so much for writing another. Hopefully you will make a series out of it. *glomps*

This was good, i think it gave it the conclusion to oro/ji that I needed (lol "I" needed. hee hee). Thanks for turning it into a twoshot. I do like the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke, so if you do consider writing something else on this story line, I will look forward to it!

That was really good! Made me sad though - I had a relationship that ended something like that :/ but none the less I enjoyed this very much.

OMG! So beautiful. I cried! O please epilogue I can't stand sad endings or something n e thing. Epilogue ONEGAI! It doesn;t have to be happy ending either just what happens after the storm, you know?! Please!

ooo..It`s good. so so sad..

Very intriguing. I like this story a lot.
Great job.

haha I liked it enough to appreciate where you took it to and to even enjoy the fact that it was not a happy ending. However, hahaha, the romantic in me, loved the oneshot enough to not want to accept it as the end. Sigh, the conflict.