rate_review Reviews

i do like this story, and it's an interesting take on their relationship.... you wrote their characterizations rather well. hope to see more oro/jira stuff soon! =) thank you for sharing

Wow that was such a sad and touching story. Sasuke is such a teme. I feel so sorry for them. They couldn't live with each other and couldn't live without each other.
Very, very sad indeed.

Well that was an awesome story.
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Very enthralling! I was hooked for the very first. I really liked the pairings. I've never read a fic that focused on Orochimaru/Jaraiya as a couple. Though is was sort of a post-relationship story, i liked it greatly. I would love to read the prequel. To see them at the young age of 12 realize their feelings for each other. Maybe even read about their first time. Also the night before, when he 'made love' to jaraiya after not seeing him in who knows how long. That's asking for a bit much isn't it? ^_^ LOVED it!