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February 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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February 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my. O_O
I'm just gonna throw in the towel now and simply wait for the next chapter to arrive. I have no idea what the next move is and can't even begin to fathom it.
I'm just gonna throw in the towel now and simply wait for the next chapter to arrive. I have no idea what the next move is and can't even begin to fathom it.
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what the fuck. that was weird. kind of reminds me of how big O played out in the end. i higher power watching them like a sitcom or a daytime soap. i'm freakin out man i gots to know wat happens next. well happy writing
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February 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was just... Wow. Epic. Loved your writing and the structure of the story. You put it together wonderfully.
And the ending! What a cliffy! So much to question! I can't wait to find out more. This looks like it will be good. Update soon, ne?
And the ending! What a cliffy! So much to question! I can't wait to find out more. This looks like it will be good. Update soon, ne?
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February 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a great beginning - I really can't wait to see where you go with this. The only things I can think of that might be beneficial to add to your prologue would be: a bit of description about the time period (i.e. how old are the characters, where would you place the events of the prologue in the storyline of the manga or anime) and maybe a bit about how this battle royale came to be. Of course, neither is necessary for the story, I'm just curious. :-) Again, great start and thanks for posting this!