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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
few things in life can create that kind of bond, and the bond naruto and sakura share is a bond forged out of love.
such a bond is nearly impossible to break. it can be a source of great strength as well.
things like these are what makes a story enjoyable, because we are offered a glimpse of something special.
fiction or not, the bond of love is just as strong in real life, as it is in the world of fiction.
I look forward to the next installment.
*fades back into the shadows from whence he came*
such a bond is nearly impossible to break. it can be a source of great strength as well.
things like these are what makes a story enjoyable, because we are offered a glimpse of something special.
fiction or not, the bond of love is just as strong in real life, as it is in the world of fiction.
I look forward to the next installment.
*fades back into the shadows from whence he came*
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June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really intense! I like the "connection" between Naruto and Sakura. Hopefully next chapter Naruto will kick Sasuke's butt!
PS. my email is moddymel2@yahoo.com
PS. my email is moddymel2@yahoo.com
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was pretty good, you've got me hooked on this story.
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May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
quite an interesting fic, can't wait to read more.
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April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really good I can't wait to see what happens next please continue.
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hehe well i love this 1 and the way you wrote it is amazing, ya u made the whole thing piece together and no erroes it's perfecrt :) naruto is really in 4 it isn't he? lol well i'll leave the rest of wat i have 2 say when i read the next 1 :p
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March 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW this 1 was awesom, i really want to c the next 1 PLZ! Post soon and don't worry mine are comming up soon.... lke in a few days soon and i no u'll like it. and yes the POV was perfectly executed, but don't Be Mad at me cuz i'll b on a lot more k? :p o i can't wait 2 c the next chapter and when they do find sasuke! hehe
Loved it and the sex scene was good 2 i no this story has a lot of potential..... lots! update and i'll talk 2 u when i post mine!
Loved it and the sex scene was good 2 i no this story has a lot of potential..... lots! update and i'll talk 2 u when i post mine!
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like your story. So the two beginning chapters was before the time skip. And the third one was when he was fighting Orochimaru by himself. I hope you update soon. Please continue the story. Not many people have finished some of there stories about Sakura and Naruto. I hope you continue.
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March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was good. cant wait to read more. by the way, when he woke up, i was looking into the depth of her sole, the bottom of her shoes. just wanted you to know. write on my wayward author
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March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very good start. I like the way you presented the first person point of view. I would not normally advise doing something like that, but you made it work. I also like how you are building real emotion between the two. Nice job!