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for Merry X-mas, Teme!

by Mako75

schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I had this urge to reread parts of "Playing with Toys" and I saw this story and HAD to read it!! I must say that I like it a lot and I hope that you do write the second part to this story soon!!! I keep wondering what Sasuke ended up getting Naruto!! Maybe a promise ring?? Hahaha, so impatient sometimes but it was so good that I want to read it again!!!
person Imagy
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lawl
and DAMN
that was soooo hawt~!
can't wait to see what happens next!
^o^
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay... so I'm reading along and I'm thinking 'damn, this is good' and then I get to the end (after blushing and bleeding from my nose and this damn stupid smile I can't turn off) and I think, okay review time and then... then I caught who the author was...
OF COURSE IT WAS AWESOME! It was YOU.
Thank you for the early... late... whichever Christmas present. I loved it.
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love this. sasuke loves naruto so much i could really feel it from your writing :) And a handcuffed naurto on his knees sucking off sas with an egg in unmentionable places... priceless, can't wait to see what u have in store for us in the conclusion. WRITE FAST!! lol

have to say tho, poor haku, married men, sad sad thing.
person Kimra
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, and found it fun to read. It even made me cry. But I thought the reconciliation happened to easily - especially for those boys. I'm not sure if I would reconcile that fast if I was in Sasuke's possition, I'd want way more assurance. But I'm just greedy.
person despairs
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like Sasuke in this story but Naruto is more than a little too flirty and physical with people (like Sai and Haku) But thats just my opinion. Good thing Sasuke is a patient person. Maybe he needs to flirt with people to show Naruto how it feels. Although i get the feeling the Naruto in this story wouldnt care.