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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, I don't usually read Het but this one has a great story, and the sex is hot!
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. I'm so glad that you updated. It was worth the wait.
Rox
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March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your storyline, I hope you update soon!
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the reviews you guys. ^_^ I appreciate it.
For mindlessmutterings, the next chapter will explain a lot on why they had gotten beaten up so easily. I wouldn't have them get their asses beat without reason. lol
For mindlessmutterings, the next chapter will explain a lot on why they had gotten beaten up so easily. I wouldn't have them get their asses beat without reason. lol
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March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really happy I stumbled upon this fic! I've mulling over Kakashi/OC scenarios in my head and finally decided to go out and read some.
Your writing is easy to read and the story is well-written. The premise is fitting and the whole thing with Jiraiya's book is a really neat idea.
I've definitely enjoyed it so far =D
I think the only complaint I really have is how easily they were getting beaten up in that fight scene. They're supposed to be these amazingly skilled Jounins and yet these two ninjas prove difficult to handle? I understand that they're trying to keep their cover, but once their cover is blown they don't really have an excuse to be making silly mistakes.
Or maybe it's just because I finally caught up on the scanlations that have been released and now I have this expectation that if you're not akatsuki then you're not a problem. Hahaha I'm a little ridiculous.
ANYWAYS.
Good job so far <3
Your writing is easy to read and the story is well-written. The premise is fitting and the whole thing with Jiraiya's book is a really neat idea.
I've definitely enjoyed it so far =D
I think the only complaint I really have is how easily they were getting beaten up in that fight scene. They're supposed to be these amazingly skilled Jounins and yet these two ninjas prove difficult to handle? I understand that they're trying to keep their cover, but once their cover is blown they don't really have an excuse to be making silly mistakes.
Or maybe it's just because I finally caught up on the scanlations that have been released and now I have this expectation that if you're not akatsuki then you're not a problem. Hahaha I'm a little ridiculous.
ANYWAYS.
Good job so far <3
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, it can be difficult to write when lacking inspiration but I still really enjoyed reading this! I was so happy to see the story updated, Great Job!
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March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dammit, I knew it was a dream. Anyway, I really love this fic. I'm guessing that the blade that slashed her back was poisoned? I can't wait to find out.
Rox
Rox
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving it. It has to be a dream. I mean, it would be great if it wasn't. I can't wait to read more.
Rox
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I realy am enjoying this story, a nice change of pace from just jumping right into the "action". I like the progression and can't wait for more. I look forward to more.
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February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm liking this so far. I love Kakashi in just about anything.
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