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for Holding the Line

by Tonko

schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome storyline! Please write more!!!
schedule March 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was sweet, emotional, entence, and wanderfull!!! I am going to keep my eye out for the next chapter! This is one of the best storys for this pairing ever!!!!
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW!WOW!WOW!WOW!WOW! THAR ROCKED!!!!! I am in love with this story!!!! I realy hope you continue!!!!!!!!
person bulmahater
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
usually i look for pwps and oneshots, but your story was simply amazing!!!!

I guess it was they way you wrote it, detailing every feeling and everything that happened!!

i wish you could continue, i couldn't tear myself away from your story!!!!
person charmpit
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Impressive.
person animelover
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
absolutely beautiful! so much feeling without all the extra porn. nejinaru is one of my fave pairings, and you've solidified that with this story. thank you!
person a kitsunes light
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! please write soon!!!
person beautifullove348
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written! I like the originality of the plot, and the smexyness didn't hurt. Your writing is new and refreshing and I like it. I look foreward to mor stories. Maybe a sequel for this one?? :P
person Mort
schedule March 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this-
It is sweet and honest-