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Naruto should concoct more pranks that end in a similar fashion ( or maybe even better fashions!) as this one did. His self loving was yummy and it was really funny reading him reprimand his "renis" before he "rasrterbated". I just noticed either, you take a lot of Nyquil, or being ill brings out your creativity =o lol ^ ^ I think imma attempt one more of your beloved fics before i call it a night, Wooo!! Gonna have some good dreams tonight! xD XOXOX Kei-Chan

I can't decide which is funnier: Naruto talking to his dick before/during masturbation, as if it were a naughty child that needed reprimanded...or Sasuke HEARING Naruto talking to his dick as if it were a naughty child needing reprimanded...in a hands-on kinda way :p

either way, it was GUHHH OMG HAWT

I really like the idea of Naruto getting an erection while wearing Sasuke's stolen undies..yep, totally..hehe. Having him MASTURBATE while in those stolen undies, and thinking about Sasuke and what HE did in them, and how he would masturbate...GUHHH (more, no words, brain dead from HOT and hilarity)

Brilliant. Seriously, this is hilarious. I love the style. Heh, I think it deserves a sequel.

...You win at life O_O...

LOL!!! That was hilarious, and cute, and oh, oh, oh THAT ENDING WAS SO UNJUST!!! NARUTO DIDN'T GET HIS REVENGE!!! And Sasuke got the last say and SEQUEL!!! PLEAAAAAASE!!! I lie. It's perfect as it is XD. Really, superbly wonderful fic. I can't stop smiling XD. "The grind faded from Naruto’s face into a look of pained horror as his train of thought led his poor little penis to a place that was quickly putting it in the position of a poor big penis." WIN!!! THAT LINE IS GOLD!!! I choked with that line XD.

Great, great, GREAT job. Keep it up ;-). Thanks for posting and letting us read! I look forward to more of your work XD!

That was freaking awesome xD I loved it a lot! It would figure that naruto's genious plan would backfire on him =D And the talking with his penis!! That was great !! Agh i loved to know what happened after Sasuke caught Naru in the act xD Awesomely awesome, imma have to read your other fics soon!

I love how Naruto talked to his penis, and the way he had to coax it out. And sasuke's line at the end was pure gold!

bwahahaha.. . i love this...i mean, you are really funny. usully i dont like the whole authorial intervention thing.. but you are excused!!! *huggles*
'inadvertant frottage' - i dont think ive ever read that before in my life..genius!!! pure genius.
you better not leave this as a one shot. XD

I'm not sure if I should feel bad for Naruto or just laugh my ass off at him... I think I shall choose the laughing though... rofl.

Very funny I enjoyed it very much. Please do say that there will be a second or third chapter... :D Thanks for the giggle. Ja ne.

Oh Queen of all things trippy that was hilarious and I luff you for it XD. *Glomps and huggles the stuffing out of Princess Reyndor*.

"Naruto had simply glared in return, his challenging eyes clearly stating no, he wasn’t effing kidding and no, the wardrobe wasn’t going to disappear just because some prissy drag queen whose ass housed the stick that inspired the ‘Thousand Years of Pain’ jutsu believed his opinion mattered to the blond on more than an occasional level.

The ensuing staring contest had lasted all of a minute before it finally sunk in that no, Naruto really wasn’t effing kidding, and yes, he truly did believe the Uchiha’s ass did in fact house such a stick."

Ahhh, but does he really believe the Uchiha is a drag queen?

Not "Qute" Revenge, Reyn? ^_^