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May 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is awesome period. I would really love to see more. This is a good twist to mpreg and I hope you'll continue soon.
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April 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this and would love to see more. Hopefully soon too
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April 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. It's an original take on mpreg, a genre I'm not a fan of, but will read if it's explained in some way that makes sense. I think the jutsu Naruto used is entirely plausible; I could actually see something like this happening in canon. (LOL, though I doubt Kishimoto would have it used on a male character.) I also really like how slow you're evolving the relationship between them. When things rush too much, it's not very satisfying, but this feels like a natural progression for them. They have so many issues between them that realistically, it'd be impossible to solve them overnight and I think you've done a good job here tackling some of them and realistically working through them. I really want to see you finish this story, but I'm a little worried about getting involved with the fic since it seems like the last update was almost 3 years ago. Is the fic a side-project for you? One you've gotten interested in finishing again? (I don't read WIPs that often because of how many of them never get finished. -_- But the prologue to this story grabbed hold of me and I couldn't stop reading.)
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April 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is really sweet. I can't wait for more. I hope Sas doesn't make Naru carry them all. Um, what about the aketsuki and such... are they still after Naru?
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. Are you going to put it on FanFiction? If not is there anyway to know when you up date other then looking for it?
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting take on the mpreg situation. I'm definitely liking this story and look forward to more.
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love your story, but why is Kakashi pissed off with Naruto?
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September 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
lovely story... enough so that I had to read it in one sitting... nyah! I am looking forward for the second part... I wonder what Sasuke was looking for in the library... How to make Uchimaki babies? LOL That would be a good one... cause you never said if he lost the womb... nyah! Lol...
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Really awesome story and very well written! I will definitely be looking forward to future chapters!
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March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
SUspensinve, update soon!!