rate_review Reviews

Oh lord. I don't know why I wanted try another one of your fics after not particularly liking the one I just read, but Rhionae's review hit the nail on the head. After all the disturbing things that happened to Sasuke, and him having ice cubes, boiling water, and two enemas shoved up his rectum, there is NO WAY he would be interested in having sex with Naruto just half an hour? an hour? after enduring all that. No only because of the trauma, but because he'd be in too much pain to be interested!

And how on earth could Naruto have had the balls to tell Sasuke Kiba & co. weren't so bad?! They suggested to Naruto that they could get rid of Sasuke after gang-raping him. Are these the actions of people who aren't so bad? (I'm sure Sasuke was the first person they ever tried this with, and they'll never, ever do anything like this again. Riiiiiiight.) And instead of having some pity on Sasuke, Naruto went right ahead with the sex. There is no way Sasuke was in his right mind when he came on to Naruto and agreed to all of that. (The fact that he had no sexual experience and had never even kissed anyone before should have been a dead giveaway that he was acting out of character.)

Maybe Naruto "saved" Sasuke from Kiba & co.'s sexual torture, but by the end of the fic, he hardly seemed much better than they were for not only trying to justify their actions to their victim, but also for thoughtlessly taking advantage of Sasuke's pain to get off. Yeah, some "angel" all right.

It's really disturbing that you would make Sasuke endure such horrible things and then instead of treating them with the seriousness they deserve, to use it as an excuse to write some cheap hurt/comfort.

Nice. So many mood changes, and so fluidly too...

I like it. :D

Jeez I kinda like Sasuke like that... lol
Are you going to do a sequel? I would like that....
Continue the good work I'm definitely getting addicted to your stories!!

wish there was a continueation of this one i'm wondering how he keeps naruto and how he would react to seeing kiba and them again.

You know what else I love about this fic? There's not one DOBE, TEME or USURATONKACHI in the whole thing. It's Naruto nailing Sasuke like his life depends on it, and Sasuke squealing Naruto's name.

This is on my recommended reading list, in case I failed to mention it before. You are a wonderful writer, Terri.

I actually found this fic rather disturbing. For Naruto to rescue Sasuke, then turn around and take advantage of his unbalanced mental state while at the same time telling Sasuke that the men who'd abused him weren't really all that bad... was even more horrifying that the original abuse. Perhaps it's just because I wouldn't have expected that of Naruto, or maybe it's because Naruto doesn't seem to see anything wrong with what he's doing to Sasuke, but this fic has been lingering in my mind all day for mostly discomforting reasons.

Oh Gods. I find myself warring with the fact that that was such a fantastic ending and the fact that I want more!! LOL *Glomps*. This was really freaking good. The beginning was such a freaking scary possibility... I kept trying to tell him to stop one of the hookers and pay them to tell you how to get to the highway. But obviously he couldn't hear me :(. Damn that really coulda been bad and a total virgin O.O.... A really freaking excellent scenario for sweet sweet sweet sex. God Sasuke was so adorable, ugh we only wish. The story with his nanny was so freaking Sad!! *Sighs* I really do want more... but meh ignore me. The story is never as good unless the writer truly wants to write it. *huggles* Thank you so much for this, the fandom has been kinda dry recently, especially of NaruSasu. I hope you write more oneshots soon XD.

WOW
noice~!
and
damn
that was sexy
I totally think that there should be some kind of follow up on this
seriously
it was just that amazing~! ^o^

Aw. I wish it wasn't just a one-shot. I liked it a whole bunch. Very well written. It's nice to see Sasuke broken to vulnerability sometimes as long as Naruto's there to pick him back up.

wow!!! that was the best story i've read in a long time
very descriptive and creative i luved the bondage but the fluff between naruto and sasuke was my favourite :P
alittle sad its a oneshot got excited thinking about how their relationship would blossom from that and how their different lives could merge and what naruto would do to those bastards who hurt his sasuke but it was still great as a oneshot too
really want to see a story like this now with the roles reversed, this was amazing with it happening to sasuke but now i'm wondering what it would be like with a similar storyline involving naruto and sasuke as the savior...meh basically u really got me thinking lol great story, very glad u made it and posted it, my life is a little bit better haha :P