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by ladywolfTerri

person charmpit
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow!

I mean WOW!

Virgin Sasuke gets lost and then found by the trio that is Diedara, Kiba, and Gaara who decide that foreplay will involve bondage, a studded belt and a tray of ice cubes. Then Naruto comes along like a knight on a white horse, cockblocks the trio in the guise of rescuing Sasuke, then gets the cherry for himself! It's BRILLIANT!

I remain in awe of your mad skills. If this isn't going to be a multi-chapter, would you consider a one-shot sequel?
person Jelp
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww, just a oneshot? It would be very interesting to see this develop as Sasuke does his best to get Naruto to stay with him. Stalker Sasuke - yay! :-)

I know you have other things to work on, but if you get the chance, I'd love to see this as a multi-chapter fic! As usual with all your work, very well written, with great interactions between Sasuke and Naruto. ~ Jelp
person SasUke28
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOO, is that how it ends! I wish there was moooooorrrreee! I love this, whatever it is! I love how Sasuke was so deliciously uke and Naruto all heroic smexy!XD, nothing caught my eye in bad grammar and the story flow was just perfect! It was one of the best reads I've had in a while! Please make more! Onegai? Por Favor? PLEASE?!

-Pepsi