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for Death of the Sun

by Eloradanin

person Halskr
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Let Sasuke save him please. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the story so far. I think Gaara should be the one to rescue Naruto. He seems like the one who would better help Naruto cope and recover.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think it's gonna have to be Gaara here. After all, Sasuke also knew Hinata, and he's not so good with the forgiving. Whereas Gaara would save Naruto even if he believed he DID do it, because he knows what it's like to have a monster inside of him.
person Repanse
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It may be predictable but I think Sasuke would fit better. Gaara knows Naruto has a monster sealed within him, but Sasuke knows *Naruto* (better than Gaara) and understands him as well. To my opinion he wouldn't even believe such thing. Plus, Gaara is the Kazekage: he admires Naruto but I'm not so sure he would be allowed to put his village in danger risking its alliance with Konoha.
Hope I didn't make grammar mistakes (English isn't my mothertongue)... XD
person caidanu
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Honestly I don't care which one saves Naruto as long as someone does. Hell you could even have them both work together and rescue him and I'm not necessarily talking about a threesome fic or anything. I just think that it would be more realistic to have more than one person breaking him out.

Great story, I really wanted to bash their heads in for raping Naruto and I'm not normally a violent person. But I mean how could they think Naruto would rape Hinata *shakes head in disgust*

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Cai
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
First of all you are very talented. And as for who should save Naruto, my vote is SASUKE!!
person LumiiSol
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was brutal. I feel so sorry for poor Naruto. I wonder how he is going to recover from that. Hmm, I think that Sasuke would make a far better savior than Gaara. Sasuke has a better grasp on who Naruto really is and would probably be able to help him recover more. While Gaara is learning more about Naruto, I don't think he would do as fine a job.
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I don't think I've ever read a prison!Naruto fic before it's certainly... interesting lol! Poor poor Naruto he needs SASUKE! to save the day! I hope we find out more about the set up too. and sasuke sasuke sasuke for his herooo!
person BennyPeace
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
While Gaara would be good, somehow I just feel like Sasuke is meant to have that role.
schedule April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay! your first story hon..I just luuurve this plot, the idea of Naruto in chains. *drools* oh the wickedness.. *dances around happily* I can`t wait for the next chappie. ^_^