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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
more please!
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May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
umm... interesting story, just be careful with details from the anime. i can see some changes sincce this is an "A/U" story, but if pulling details from the anime/ manga, please do double check them. bt otherwise, i'd like to see where you take this...
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Second Hokage is Tsunade's grand-uncle; close try on your part, though. Also, we know very little about Madara against the Senju clan, aside from the fact that Shodai defeated him at the Valley of the End; beyond that, nothing is known, certainly not that Madara killed them all. And a beaver? God, Neji's going to have a helluva time living that down. Keep it coming.
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Almost forgot to mention also that Shodai is the only one (aside from Yamato/Tenzou) to have used Mokuton (Wood Style). Even though Tsunade's his direct descendent, she's never shown any hint of the ability.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. I like the story.
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May 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Tsunade's grandfather is the First Hokage (Senju Hashirama (last name, first name)) not the Second Hokage. Other than that, not bad.