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Omfg you updated! Woot! You just made my day!

wow, hehehehehe, that was a really fun chapter. I was so excited to see it posted and it couldn't have come at a better time, seriously, I just finished all my finals and am now thoroughly enjoying my first day off in weeks. Thank you :D im grinning from ear to ear right now. Choreographing a foursome must be both difficult and exciting and I loved the emotions and referencing back to Sasuke every once in a while it twisted the knife that much more every time you did that lol. I was thrilled when they ganged up on him too, although I thought that could have used a little bit more time, made it a little more paramount because it really is so significant. I cant wait to hear what he has to say, really curious if it will change the story or add a new element. Youre one of my favorite authors and this is definitely my favorite story Im currently reading, bravo I love your work.

Oh, my gaaaawd... so much smut! if I had an Inner Nymph she'd be dead right now from blood loss.

This was well worth the wait to be sure, though I almost, ALMOST wish they would have left Sasuke alone. You know... let him stew a bit. Maybe even make him beg to join them. But my favorite part has to the the KakaNaru sexing. I'm not really a big fan of that pairing, but you did such a beautiful job with it. I loved all the tender/rough mixing you did there. It was very sweet.

And Kakashi yanking Sakura off of Sai? Hell yeah! Go Copy Ninja! Take what's yours!

So... now I'm curious to see what Sasuke has to say. Should be interesting. Thanks for the update!

IT'S MIIIIINNNEEEEEE!!!

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:holds tissue to nose and glares:

Okay, so here's the more...coherent critique...

I LOVED EVERYTHING!!!!!!

Hahahahaha, but that's not all. Kakashi's whole 'My team, my uke's, my rules,' thing had me giggling until I freaked out at Sasuke getting free and Naruto essentially jumping him and.......:dies:

Kakashi sexing up Naruto was....there's no words for what you did to me. The closest I can get to is :Naruto's back shimmy:, and even then...I don't quite know if it's enough.

Naruto deepthroating Sasuke after his somewhat soul-filled confession had me gasping for breath and stuffing my fist in my mouth so I wouldn't wake anyone up with my obsessive screaming. The walls of my apartment, while not thin, aren't exactly thick either and I don't want to make my neighbors think I'm getting murdered.

Okay, I think that's all I can offer you for this round. :Lights up cigar:

I imagine this was as good for you as it was for me. :Cheesy pervy grin:

So many possibilities for the end...
and i really like the one you chose.
and great crack on Pakkun, there. poor pug. *snickers* poor sasuke. all wound up and ready to burst.


It was worth the wait!!! i have to go find a wet mop, cause i had a moment of wishing i was Sakura. *sighs* too bad...

Hey, dina.... can i steal Sai? or would the seme duo beat me for it? *chuckles*

Wait! .... crap... fucking bunnies. or is it fucking like bunnies? not sure.

*sniffles* anywhoe, yay for new chapter postage!! Cookies and brownies for you!!!

Still drooling.....

Oops um....hurries to get a bucket as she realizes she is swimming now in a puddle of fangirlness.

While I bail myself out of drowning I must say. I NEED MORE!

Thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!! You ROCK!!!!!!!!!!! Finally! So happy you didn't abandon it!! More more more more!!!!!!

Hee hee, good work, as usual, and I am awaiting the next chapter like you wouldn't believe... (Seriously, it's like I've been starved of all chocolate and sugar forever, and reading the chapter was like stuffing my mouth with a twix in 10 seconds... and then wanting more, like, "huh? where'd the all sugary goodness go?"

Please deliver more sugary goodness (read hot sex)! : )

Wow! Just wow. I nearly fainted when I saw that this had been updated - I've been waiting patiently for you to have the time to update, and it was worth the wait. I love the little snarks that they all spout, and the way that you included Sasuke at the end was priceless. Fabulous work.

I think I prefer the second title XD

On another note... I didn't know we were allowed to bitch at the writer for slow updates
You have granted power with this knowledge MUAHAHAHAHAHA