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for Bitch Nights

by Blackwidina

person roxnroll
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was so HOT!! I'm glad that Sasuke got in on the action. I'm looking forward to finding out what he wants to talk about.
Rox
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I check for updates as much as I can and I was so happy when I saw the little 13 instead of 12 on the chapter spot. That was just... amazing. I bow down to your all powerful writing skills. Thank you for another great chapter of Bitch Nights! Can't wait for 14!
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I almost missed this! It was worth the wait! For some reason it alwasy comes down to Sasuke, Naruto, and Kakashi. You establised that this was Sasuke's main area of jealousy in the chapter when he found Sai's art book. I'm glad that you remained consistent with that idea and even the fact that Naruto picked up on it. I like Sakura in your fic but the dynamic between Naruto and Sasuke is so much more important because even in the anime, Sasuke's interest lie with Naruto - his approval, rivalry, friendship, etc.

Love it, and take your time! I enjoy this fic!
person Aini
schedule May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, what can I say? That was damn sexy. I absolutly loved it. And the part with Sasuke? hee, I loved how they all held him down while Naruto gave him a 30-second blowjob. XD Nice touch on that one. Of course, the fun and games can't last forever (of which I'm sure you're very grateful of) and the serious business begins! Oh no! lol

Fantastic chapter. :) I'm happy that you finally finished it and I was able to read it. Hopefully inspiration and time treat you nicely with this next chapter. Good luck and I anxiously wait for more. :D
person Cake-sama
schedule May 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*cheers from the fan section*

MY. GOD. Thank god someone finally shut that boy up! (really, it's not like he has anything important to say anyway ^_^) Score one for Team Orgy, while Pansy-boy is falling behind!!

"I want to be broken, sensei..."

Truer words were never spoken, Sakura.
person Silver
schedule May 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like the story very much, it's just sad that it looks like it'll never be finished (seeing how updates take months)
But I like what there is of it anyway.

Silver
person ano
schedule May 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What have I got to do to get you update more? Please, tell me oh great wonderful author.
My first born? My money? My cat? You can have them all!
Just update ;-;
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What an enjoyable read. You've managed to keep them all in character in a very out of character setting. I adored the sparring scenes. You did wonderfully describing them, and the bedlam of the emergency. Great work.
schedule May 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
EEeeeeeee....How could you leave me there! Man, I must admit that's pretty vicious of them all, I hope this turns out well...I think it will, going with the current tone of the story, but I must say I'm worried about it after the perspective from Sai in the grocery store...

person dustin
schedule April 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!! and can you e-mail me when you do? i want to know what happens! please hurry...my life...is...fading...need...yaoi...orgified..