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for Bitch Nights

by Blackwidina

person Dragonangelx003
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, when Duck-Butt called Sakura a slut you could cut the tension in THIS room, I cant imagine what it was like in that poor living room. I really look forward to the next chapter. *claps*
person crazyforkakashi
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no you did it now. I hope you get the next chapter up soon.Thanks for sharing.
person roxnroll
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww poor Sasuke. I hope someone lets him in on the action. Great job.
Rox
person PanickedSerenity
schedule December 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! You updated!!! Sweet. Poor Sasuke(even if he does deserve it). Darn you for getting me all excited for some action then leaving it off like that! ;P that was just mean. I can't wait for the next chapter. I loved Sai's POV in this one. That was some amazing writing.
person Leeana69
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HOW COULD YOU JUST STOP!!! Especially since I know it's gonna take you like three more months to update. :pouts:

Ha, I was expecting for Sasuke to get invited in on the action this round, but I guess that would have been a little too fast....even if it would have been friggen hot. :mumbles:

Thanks for dedicating this chapter to me, I love you too. And Salty Cravings loves you back, Dina me love.

:uber-snuggles:
person Raholea
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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You. Are. Mean.

And chapter 13 better be worth it. I do have a Kyuubi on a string I can always let chase you, you know.... *pouts*

Though, admittedly, it was sooo worth the wait. And numbing his vocal chords was priceless. *snickers* And the relocated testicles.... and.. Oh. Yeah. I'll quit while I'm ahead. hehehe ......
person chibi-zoe
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're back! (I figured you must have finals or EoY paperwork needing to get done)

I love the idea of Sasuke being forced to listen in...and being unable to do anything about it, and the idea of him starting to really dig into his sundae (nothing quite like loosened inhibitions). I'm looking forward to the next installment (lemon, lime, and kiwi fruit salad XD - yummy)
person lilly bet
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i was beginning to wonder. It has been forever. I am please to see you continuing the story. I can not wait for more.
person tovah
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really was liking this story but I can't help feeling sorry for Sasuke. It breaks my heart that he is having such a hard time dealing with his feelings and know one cares. I think this story is making the whole gang just look so cruel hearted. Well I will just keep reading hoping that it will work out for him.
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow...this is what I called teaching someone a lesson, making it painful, and eliminating all misunderstandings what so ever. Down south we call this taking the roof off a house. No where to hide.

Poor Sasuke!

Eh, FUCK Sasuke. He's getting what he deserves. As usual another awesome chapter. You are doing a wonderful job with this story and if people don't like it, there are plenty badly written fics on this site they can go drool over since they can recognize a true piece of storytelling. ~Kenya