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by Blackwidina

schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
EEEKKK!!!!! Hahaahahaha, omg you are sadistic lol. This is really interesting progress to the story and I cannot wait for the next chapter, I can hardly sit still im so excited! I feel bad for Sasuke but my god he deserves to squirm, what wonderful payback. I wasn't expecting sakura to be so insistent about have sex either, must be the alcohol and getting so worked up ;) Seriously please dont make us wait too long.
person Aini
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AUGH! You can't do that! Mean, mean, mean, mean, mean! XD And believe it or not, I actually feel for Sasuke more then I do the others. This is going to SUCK for him. Poor guy. They'll give him relief after wards, won't they? *puppy eyes* Won't they? Tying him up is mean, but leaving him to just...ache all night is cruel...Really cruel. XD

Can't wait for more, but don't rush it! What you've got is quality and I love it!
person DMLB
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've liked the story a lot so far, but there has been a lot of Sasuke bashing lately. I don't love the guy, but it seems to have taken over the story and that kind of kills it for me. I hope they (or he) moves past this soon because it seems to be getting kind of pointless. I like your writing though! (I feel I need to end on a positive note, lol, but it's still true).
person Anon
schedule December 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you took forever!! I am pleased with this chapter, even though I could be super pleased if you add that little orgy at the end. Well I just hope you update sooner then before. (p.s. Sasuke really is stupid)
person pance
schedule December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so i just stumbled across your story. I'm happy to see it isn't another one that has been left for dead (not you but there seems to be alot of those on this site). It was a little odd at first since I usually stick to just kaka/saku or kaka/naru but I have to say its very interesting and I love how they changed their attitude to a fuck you towards Sasuke. I personally think he deserves it :-p. I love the story so far. Can't wait til you add more ^_^
peace out
person Tink
schedule December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thats all i can say.
Your last chapter made me laugh so hard at the beginning with the "play" with between Sai, Naruto and Sakura, i was laughing so loud that my roommate came and asked me what was going on. brilliant! i love what you are doing with the characters, the conectedness that you have given them, keeping them in character to a level that i have read in only a few stories. the lemons are great too, got me really frustrated *drool* just picturing... hahaha... anyway... you are an amazing writer and i envy you for your skills. i really REALLY (emphasis on the really :P) look forward to reading more of Bitch Nights, (i really like the Director's Cut too)
thank you sooooo much!
~Tink
person rinchi
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love your Bitch Nights *_*
Well... often with the genre Threesome/Moresome comes solely PWP (Plot? What Plot?). Your story isn't completely like that, I really love the affectionate interactions they have with each other, and the way the develop their nin skills, too.

Hope you manage to overcome your writer's block, because I just adore your fanfic ^_^
Fortunately your foot wasn't that bad. The worst I've ever had was a bad sprain... oh well... that hurt enough.

Your newly self-appointed fan
person Leeana69
schedule November 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Please....:D
person Leeana69
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pshaw woman...PSHAW.

I shall rant on what ever I want to rant about and your petty words shall not stop me. XD

Great chapter though, Sasuke is such a Jealous little bitch and I so can't wait to see that happens in later chapters.

And I so bet that the boys are keeping score...with whatever they can. Pervy bastards. XDDDDDD
person Leeana69
schedule November 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I offically love Ino.

"Tell me what I need to know."

"That outfit clashes with your hair." Seriously funny.

And Buffallo Bill...God I can just see Orochimaru being all 'It puts the lotion on it's skin or it gets the hose.' ;_;

I'm gonna have nightmares for sure....and can I get a chapter dedicated to me sometime...I feel so unloved. XDDDDD