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November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
my god, I love this so much. It's a brilliantly told story, and I'm loving it more as I read. Even though I loathe the prick with all of my heart, I do hope Sasuke will get some loving by the end, it's so painfully obvious that he wants Sakura in the later chapters and the way you write him... he's still in character except actually bearable. And the way you write Sakura is pure gold. And.. and.. and... Look, I really can't fault this fic. It makes the fangirl in me so very, very happy.
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October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
so amazingly good... love it
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hilarious and soe Serious thrown in.
Awesome
Tell your mom I said hi
wtf?
LOLOLOL
Priceless
Awesome
Tell your mom I said hi
wtf?
LOLOLOL
Priceless
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH...I love you, update soon please!!
XDDD
XDDD
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh look at the reviews you've got! ^____^
So much already! You know what that means? Your story is great :]
I couldn't stop laughing during naruto's last "dying breaths" hahahaha so funny!
aww im...kinda warming up to sasuke thanks to this chapter...hmmm
I love your writing style! It's so much fun to read. ^_^ great characterization and PLOT as well hehe
Thank you for this chapter!
So much already! You know what that means? Your story is great :]
I couldn't stop laughing during naruto's last "dying breaths" hahahaha so funny!
aww im...kinda warming up to sasuke thanks to this chapter...hmmm
I love your writing style! It's so much fun to read. ^_^ great characterization and PLOT as well hehe
Thank you for this chapter!
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! there was no smut, but there was great action anyway ;)
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is the first fic I have liked that has Sakura in it doing anything!!!! Your a great writer and I cant wait to see where this fic will take us!!
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Finnaly!An Update!I LOVE this story.It has humor,romance and smut.I like how Sakura, Sai, Naruto and Kakashi's mind work. The Naruto's 'dying moment' was hilarious!Anyway,I can't wait to read the 12th chap.
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October 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Your story is one of the only one's I've actually kept in my 'favourites' bar for so long inbetween chapters; or really, waited for at all when the story's not complete. Kudos on an excellent chapter! Watching you fuck with Sasuke gets more interesting every time. Well, I don't really have anything constructive to contribute, since I'm better with grammar than characterization and plot.
Can't wait until your next update.
-Muse
Can't wait until your next update.
-Muse
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October 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hie! i just discovered your fic, and I love it!
A tiny part of me wants Sasuke to suffer and continue to be jealous without hope... While another growing bigger any moment is somewhat hoping to see him 'join the circus' at the end! *grins* inner Saku.. I mean, Inner me with her own yaoi tendency thinking that it would be just so HOT! *grins even more* Though I have to say I loved the beplay between him and Sai, as well as the jealousy and his possessives tendencies, particulary toward Naruto. Oh, love the smut! Particulary between Naruto and Kakashi, or Naruto and Sai (guess who is my favorite character...) I can't wait for things to heat up between Naruto and Kakashi particulary (a bit more than things with Sai, but then we have know them for longer in the manga) but then, i suppose it will happen soon enough, and be even more appreciated when it does (don't worry, I like how the story is going so far. Just stating that you have us readers fantasming on lots of things, here, and I can't help but to fell VERY close to Sakura when she gets the opportunity to 'enjoy some Private Yaoi Show' *grins*) Hmm... Wonder how Sasuke would react to Naruto and Kakashi kissing? (not Sai, he might be tempted to just punch) I mean, should he not beleave them and all... Oh, I'd love to see more about the reactions of their friends, too! I really enjoyed the bit with Ino!
A tiny part of me wants Sasuke to suffer and continue to be jealous without hope... While another growing bigger any moment is somewhat hoping to see him 'join the circus' at the end! *grins* inner Saku.. I mean, Inner me with her own yaoi tendency thinking that it would be just so HOT! *grins even more* Though I have to say I loved the beplay between him and Sai, as well as the jealousy and his possessives tendencies, particulary toward Naruto. Oh, love the smut! Particulary between Naruto and Kakashi, or Naruto and Sai (guess who is my favorite character...) I can't wait for things to heat up between Naruto and Kakashi particulary (a bit more than things with Sai, but then we have know them for longer in the manga) but then, i suppose it will happen soon enough, and be even more appreciated when it does (don't worry, I like how the story is going so far. Just stating that you have us readers fantasming on lots of things, here, and I can't help but to fell VERY close to Sakura when she gets the opportunity to 'enjoy some Private Yaoi Show' *grins*) Hmm... Wonder how Sasuke would react to Naruto and Kakashi kissing? (not Sai, he might be tempted to just punch) I mean, should he not beleave them and all... Oh, I'd love to see more about the reactions of their friends, too! I really enjoyed the bit with Ino!