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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you.
And Thank you for the chapter: YAY that was great and made my day. And I felt the changes: mentioning of the others' pairings without Sakura (and how she and we want to watch them ;D ) the flirting of the guys. That keeps the feeling of "all of them with each other" and not only "with Sakura". Great Job.
And a great job in keeping the distance between Sasuke and the others. no quick healing there, it has to be worked on and thats what you started. You did a great job with the slow teasing at the beginning and the question of why he puts up with it to the action part and the exchange of the MANY (lol Sasuke actually talks :D ) words
Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And Thank you for the chapter: YAY that was great and made my day. And I felt the changes: mentioning of the others' pairings without Sakura (and how she and we want to watch them ;D ) the flirting of the guys. That keeps the feeling of "all of them with each other" and not only "with Sakura". Great Job.
And a great job in keeping the distance between Sasuke and the others. no quick healing there, it has to be worked on and thats what you started. You did a great job with the slow teasing at the beginning and the question of why he puts up with it to the action part and the exchange of the MANY (lol Sasuke actually talks :D ) words
Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about that.
Oh girl you get some very strange reviews.
I don't like Sasuke in many fics because he returns and everything is fine but you returned him WITH his problems and you will not ignore the break in relationship and that's great. No boring Sasuke comes back and everything is fine fic.
Every fanfic changes the story and once you change the story the charas will change with it. But thinking about how would a chara react in the given situation and how would this situation CHANGE this chara is what keeps them "in character" even though they do not act like the 12 year old originals anymore (what a suprise).
Please take some reviews just as a "I do not know what to write but this fic was soooooo great that I want to leave some show of my appreciation"
(I feel mean but they deserve this)
Oh girl you get some very strange reviews.
I don't like Sasuke in many fics because he returns and everything is fine but you returned him WITH his problems and you will not ignore the break in relationship and that's great. No boring Sasuke comes back and everything is fine fic.
Every fanfic changes the story and once you change the story the charas will change with it. But thinking about how would a chara react in the given situation and how would this situation CHANGE this chara is what keeps them "in character" even though they do not act like the 12 year old originals anymore (what a suprise).
Please take some reviews just as a "I do not know what to write but this fic was soooooo great that I want to leave some show of my appreciation"
(I feel mean but they deserve this)
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I think I felt a moment there between Sakura and Sasuke. I hope I'm right and Sakura gets action from all of her yummy boys.
Rox
Rox
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are truly an inspiration. Every chapter has me giggling and I feel that you hit the emotional/relationship needs of each character (in the beginings of a relationship) dead on. Though Duck-butt's monolog seemed a bit forced. That's probably just me as I don't care for him. And yes, I read the whole thing through and waited to the latest chapter to say anything. The Kaka/Saku shop quickie was just priceless!! And just the thought (of the possiblity) of Sasuke's reaction to Naruto and Sai going at it (as in hearing and/ or walking in on them) has me at the end of my chair hoping you have something in mind.
Thank you for sharing this story.
Thank you for sharing this story.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks Allah! I was waiting forever for you to update, then you write this. This chapter was like a sucker punch of greatness. I just hope you update sooner.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want more. Its so gooooooood!
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And you're back.....OMFG I was like literally checking daily to see if you updated. I love this story!!! And yes while the LEMONS are GREATLY appreciated it is the story itself with all the plot twist and turns that I am digging!
And you're allowed to rant...it's part of the creative genius if anybody ask!
Well hope you're over the writers block! And that you update soon!!!
Fallen
And you're allowed to rant...it's part of the creative genius if anybody ask!
Well hope you're over the writers block! And that you update soon!!!
Fallen
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* that was like good sex after a long spot of abstinence.
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome story. Seriously. I was so excited when I saw you updated. I laughed my ass off at Naruto's 'Death.' It was great. Thank you! I can't wait until the next chapter(and hopfully the next orgy! ;))
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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
And in latest news, a recapped of Feion's favorite part of Bitch nights:
“Naruto was the most enthusiastic lover of the three, and probably the cuddliest; Sai was surprisingly gentle and would bend over backwards to pleasure her, and Kakashi was probably the kinkiest bastard she'd ever come across. Or even heard about (except for maybe Genma.)”
Must I tell you just how brilliant that was? Lol It only helped that WE both know exactly where this comment if coming from. Genma is a freaking kink-pimp, okay? Bravo, love you always managed to amaze me. *snuggles*
“Naruto was the most enthusiastic lover of the three, and probably the cuddliest; Sai was surprisingly gentle and would bend over backwards to pleasure her, and Kakashi was probably the kinkiest bastard she'd ever come across. Or even heard about (except for maybe Genma.)”
Must I tell you just how brilliant that was? Lol It only helped that WE both know exactly where this comment if coming from. Genma is a freaking kink-pimp, okay? Bravo, love you always managed to amaze me. *snuggles*