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October 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*claps* Very good, I absolutely love your writing style. Keep up the good work.
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October 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I WANT MOREEEEEEE!
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October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeek I love how far you've taken your story! I think the last time I read it you were on chapter four... O.o It's really good, I hope you update soon and I love how pissy you've made Sasuke. It fits him perfectly... Also one question, were you ever up on fanfiction.net. I don't remember if I first saw your story there or here.... -_-;;;;
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October 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS, LOVE THIS LOVE THIS. Who cares if they are a little out of character (not that i think that they are that off) what is the point of fanfic otherwise. This is HILARIOUS as well as fucking hot. love the sex scenes...want more...drool!
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA I love the whole mood swing thing cause it's so true.
BOO HOO HOOO....I'm sad.
FUCK YOU, I HATE YOU SO MUCH.
And now I'm sad again.
XDDD
BOO HOO HOOO....I'm sad.
FUCK YOU, I HATE YOU SO MUCH.
And now I'm sad again.
XDDD
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September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!?!?!?!?!? UPDATE..UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE.
Please. :D
Please. :D
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT ... omg you have got to keep writing XD i cant wait to see what happens next ... --x--
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September 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squees* just found this story (lol, haven't been keeping up to date with fics) and OMG! *huggles the author* it's the first time that i've seen a 3some/moresome fic with the "new" team kakashi, but... i love it! you've managed to keep everyone in character, and i especially like what you're doing to sasuke, lol, bastard deserves to be screwed with XD (i'm not a sasuke-basher, but sometimes he just annoys the crap out of me) i can't wait for the next chapter! *giggles* can't wait to see how much more sakura screws with sasuke!
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September 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, now that was a biiiiiig journey! Man, the sex overall was quite good. And Sakura sure is leaving many women's fantasies :P
That said, this whole thing with Sasuke bothers me a lot. I would have loved the story more if he wasn't there at all, seeing him suffering is kinda making me cringe all the time. But then again, it it weren't for that, the story, sexy as hell as it is, would have no plot, so I'll just suck it up. I just like Sasuke too much to see him suffering I guess. Or maybe I am just as emo as he. Even if you know "having your whole clan slaughtered by your once beloved brother as said brother then mind rapes you" is not the same as "not finding the exact shade of black for my mascara"... I mean it is obvious that Sasuke came back for "them" ("them" being Team 7), but now they don't need him anymore and he hasn't any home anyway so... I guess he should just go away and get killed by Itachi off camera (or kill Itachi and fulfill his life mission, whatevs)... After all he is only a traitor because he left the village to train with Orochimaru, he didn't attack it or reveal "its" secrets to the enemy (and I doubt that he knows any secret jutsu of Konoha that Oro-chan didn't already know)... but meh, like I read somewhere in a fic "a hidden ninja village is like a jealous woman, you cheat on her and you pay for all your life more that its worth".
OK, I am rambling. tl;dr version of it: looooove the sex and the way the foursome interacts, dislike the Sasuke bashing and would preffer that Sasuke never appeared at all.
That said, this whole thing with Sasuke bothers me a lot. I would have loved the story more if he wasn't there at all, seeing him suffering is kinda making me cringe all the time. But then again, it it weren't for that, the story, sexy as hell as it is, would have no plot, so I'll just suck it up. I just like Sasuke too much to see him suffering I guess. Or maybe I am just as emo as he. Even if you know "having your whole clan slaughtered by your once beloved brother as said brother then mind rapes you" is not the same as "not finding the exact shade of black for my mascara"... I mean it is obvious that Sasuke came back for "them" ("them" being Team 7), but now they don't need him anymore and he hasn't any home anyway so... I guess he should just go away and get killed by Itachi off camera (or kill Itachi and fulfill his life mission, whatevs)... After all he is only a traitor because he left the village to train with Orochimaru, he didn't attack it or reveal "its" secrets to the enemy (and I doubt that he knows any secret jutsu of Konoha that Oro-chan didn't already know)... but meh, like I read somewhere in a fic "a hidden ninja village is like a jealous woman, you cheat on her and you pay for all your life more that its worth".
OK, I am rambling. tl;dr version of it: looooove the sex and the way the foursome interacts, dislike the Sasuke bashing and would preffer that Sasuke never appeared at all.
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow!! I don't know what else to say, just wow!! This is one of the best fics i have ever resd, especially foursome-fics and adult-fics!