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*jaw drops* wow. i must be back for more chapters of this. yes, i think everyone is pretty in character, all told, and i love the action in here. (sexual and not) oh, and was the end of your last chapter implying just sai and kakashi behind doors? just curious what you had in mind/ implied there.

and, umm, i added you to my im, cause i love your writings and thought maybe one author chat with another? *nervous chuckle* connect if you feel like it. and i'll be waiting for more!!!!

I LOVE this fic, is hilarious and very well written. I wish that the conversations (and other things ^_^) that happen in here actually happen in the manga/anime. I can't wait til the next chapter! When you do add to this, do you think that you could send me an email with the web address to let me know? the email is PotionsPet@hotmail.com

OH GOD I LOVE YOU! SERIOUSLY LOVE YOU! THIS I AWESOME AND...you need to update again soon please. Another orgy would be nice for Sauske to walk into right? It makes for some interesting possibilities at least. HEHEHEHE duck butt get's frozen in place watching the four go at it. be hilarious to see anyways. (lol) whatever you do keep doing it. thanks

Taka

o wow, i'm loving this. i hope your muse speaks well with you. this is tottaly awsume.
keep writing, i think your goign down a good story line.

Gyyaa!! Squee! one of the best ive read in alooong time! keep it up pleeease. i reaaly dunt wana see this one fissle out like so many others >,<

Fuck i wish i was part of that hot Foursome... i tell you i would love to feel kaka and Naru Hentainess... also make sakura and sai fall under my cock...

i also would like to see sasuke being raped by akamaru for being selfish he doesnt deserver the foursome but he stop being an ass... he may get some hot naru's cock, and maybe is sakura isnt busy with kaka... she may give him pussy that is what i think hehehee

wow, I don't think that I've ever reviewed on AFF. But I love this story. It keeps me warm at night :) I think the plot is well balanced and the characters are as well. I have to say, I Hate Sasuke in the manga but I appreciate his influence on this story. Especially the visuals that I get of him from the new Naruto Shippuden movie trailers. giggles. My only question is, how good of an idea is it to play their "game" on his psyche? It already proved a point in showing that Sai was not his replacement, so is gonna further into the thought that they never replaced Sasuke at all? That he had a place at the table all along, nut he kinda has to earn it back? Okay, so I don't actually expect you to answer that question but now that I thought this out, the game is a good idea and Sasuke should be knocked down a few pegs before any kind of reconcilliation takes place. I would normally erase all this and leave just a "You Rock!" review but maybe you can see my thought process and the perverbial light bulb over my head.
On a side note, I just read this story before the last update, so how often do you update? I'm not on the site on a regualr basis but dont want to miss any of your updates! okay, I swear that is all from me, keep up the great work!

You tell 'em Dina-chan!
And besides, just because you didn't include it in the fic doesn't mean that the boys aren't getting any on the side. Like you said, most of it is from Sakura's pov and when she isn't with all three of her boys, there's no telling what they are up to.

Loved it!
Your updates always make my day. You're so funny!

Love the story line nd the way you you are writing... I hope you will update soon...

I spent Sasuke's whole part of the fic acting it out in my mind and laughing my ass off. Fantastic loved the public kaka/saku! More pls!!