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for Bitch Nights

by Blackwidina

person Anon
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think Sai and Naruto have the best chemistry, based on your story, not on the anime. Sakura and Naruto would be sweet and passionate because it would be the culmination of long time feelings, kakashi and the younger ones like student and mentor in love techniques, sai and naruto would be like exploring love, life and sense of humor (in sai's case) together, you know always something new to learn and feel. I don't quite picture how Sasuke would fit though, the repentant lover perhaps?
person chibizoe
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better and better! I love Sasuke's reactions to EVERYTHING, the whole mine, mine, mine thing is fantastic, and Kakashi...(nosebleed)
person Ri
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love how Sasuke is more possessive of Naruto than Sakura, reiterating time and time again the phrase "My dobe".. good job!
person Racine
schedule August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
bounces around and is a happy girl. Thank you so much for writting this ... I was totally squealing during the Kakashi/Sakura in the clothes shop.....ahhhhhh. OMG!!!!! Awesome. Keep up the good work!!!!!
person Kisagura-chan
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Its so.. Its great! I check every few days for it.. The newest chapter (11) Was hilarious... Well, at least the catfight, followed by Kakashi making a joke... Now every time I see Sasuke I start laughing uncontrollably... His hair is very duck-butt shaped. ^^;
But Kudos for updating on a Friday!
And I'm looking forward to new chapters!!!
Have fun! And.. Sasuke does seem the type to be a possessive bitch... MINE! MY AIR!' I can see it now... xD Like that little fish in finding Nemo? The one that kept yelling they were his bubbles.. Yup... ^^;
Love the story keep it up!
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Updated! I love the story so far. I don't consider this a harem fic, more like one huge relationship fic. Each member brings something to the relationship. I can somewhat see Sasuke fitting into it but he's got a lot of humility to learn first. You can't lash out like he does. A multi-relationship like this one requires absolute trust and love. *grins* Let's see. I can't wait for more!
person Dragonangelx003
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*claps furiously* THAT WAS AWESOME! I dont know what part was better. Kakashi loosing his composure in the shop, which was very hot btw, or Sasuke's reaction when Kakashi said "I am, too. So no." BRILLIANT! Keep it up!
person nm1716
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really love this chapter and can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!!!
person countdown
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was funniest chapter you wrote so far. You have me sitting in a quite computer lab giggling. I do hope you update soon so I can see how everything plays out.
person carol
schedule August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im glad you decided to continue this story. I kind of feel sorry for sasuke right now he has no clue whats going on. So sasuke did have feelings for naruto.