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by Blackwidina

schedule August 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've actually really enjoyed reading this.

I'm just really wanting to read the next chapter now is all.

You've done really well with this story so PLEASE don't discontinue it.
person Queenie7
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*claps* very good teaser chapter. I cant wait till Sasuke cant take anymore. AND he finds about Kakashi as well.
person Paige Taylor
schedule August 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ive only just started reading this fic tonight...and ive come to the conclusion that its fricking awesome!!!
Cant wait for the next chapter!!! (P.S Can I bribe with cookies to make it come quicker?)
person blaquekitsune
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i luv this! so bad an sneaky! so lookin forward to the update.
person Frodo
schedule August 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude the story is the best! and ive only read 2 chapters of it! lol
person Wraithguard
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the most recent update.

Just so you know, this is the only fic with sakura being fucked by kakashi that i like, so please continue.
person Anonymous
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like things so far. One thing, this seems like more of a Sakura harem fic, with a little side action, than a foursome, soon to be fivesome. The only time we really see anyone even flirting with anyone else is if it is a group scene. On the other hand Sai, Kakashi and Naruto are shown flirting with Sakura pretty much every time they see her. Sasuke, who you are portraying as bi apparently decides to stop at SAKURA'S apartment on the way to prison, not Naruto's. Even by your description of their interaction Sasuke bearly notices her when they meet, focuses on Naruto, but the first person he has to see is SAKURA? Don't get me wrong, I don't mind a harem fic, I still like the story, but it definitely seems to have a Sakura harem feel to it.

As for who gets Naruto first, although I doubt they will really be his first, even though you seem to be setting up him and Sai as a side couple, I think it should be Sai. Kakashi already seems to have edged them out as a clear favorite with Sakura and Sasuke lost his right to that honor years ago.
person Meikyuu
schedule August 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaaah! screams squeals loves this fic all over. please please please give sasuke some love! make him suffer... and hurt really badly for letting kishimoto turn him into such a bastard like he is now. but omg... the last chapter was so sasuke still loves naruto who totally left him behind, and he wants sakura too... and we all know he'd do kakashi in a heart beat! sai and he ::shudders:: I still have no idea what Kishimoto was thinking when he drew them together, but LOL! that pairing comes with the creato's blessing! so he's really compatible with all of them, and sakura gets more loving! in my stubborn hopes that you'll forgive him eventually, seeing him suffer like this was TOO much fun. It's probably unhealthy to have such an addiction to sasuke-pain. OMG the way Naruto appeared at the end, I think I got a nosebleed.

Thank you for updating and thanks for sharing this AWESOME story.
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. I admit that I was hesitant about reading this story to begin with but I'm glad I gave this story a chance finally. Looking forward to the update and thanks for the vocab lesson.
person InARealPickle
schedule August 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Unresolved Angst...
sounds painful. Does the Power of Emo cure that or cause it to fester?
Hilarious! Couldn't stop laughing :D
This fic is the only reason I make regular visits to this site. I always look to see if there has been an update.
[Oh. Migod.] Inner Sakura shrieked. [Let's FUCK with him!!!] XD