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for Bitch Nights

by Blackwidina

person animelover
schedule July 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice! i only have one request: please don't let sasuke squirm his way back into the group. sure it's not his fault the higher ups are stupid, but he should still suffer. ;-)
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS!!!
person Queenie7
schedule June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you are an amazing writer. Not only can you write a realistic, lusty scene, but you make it HOT. That and some lines like "heat seeking amoeba" and "Lust puddle" made me laugh aloud. Keep up the good work and I hope my fanfic Icha Icha Vacation, gets even half the attention that yours does. I am truly jealous and look forward to the next chapter. Dattebayo!
person meep
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thank you for another update! i hope later on, you can do more sai/sakura action. :]

And enjoy your trip!
person AndDown
schedule June 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Actually, no i havn't counted ...

You do have a point, and i will have to agree with it : D

Well done on the latest chapter, hopefully the trip to England will do some good!
person blaquekitsune
schedule June 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot fucking hot
my heart is pounding in anticapation.
update soon.
person roxnroll
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful. I'm hoping that Sasuke gets added into the mix soon. I can sense that even though they are all disappointed in him, that they all still love him.
Great job.
Rox
person Anon
schedule June 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated thak you thank you thanyou do it agin soon will ya
person Renee
schedule June 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG
love it, please please continue
person AndDown
schedule June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Alright, don't know how you'll take this -.-"

The whole head hitting and 'Baka!' got a litttttllleeee too repeditive for me, so i would suggest maybe not putting as many in?

The whole story was fine, very funny indeed. Can't wait for the next one!