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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it
simply love it......all of them in the sack...no sasuke!
NO SASUKE! *throw hands in the air* Tired of that threesome and no kakashi! Now this I like<3
you are awesome for even making this. I definatly love the whole fuck that teme parts as well as how open minded and twisted the lemon was.
mmm....kakashi-sensei was....pretty hot. And sai was finally in a threesome lemon! About damn time
please make more
simply love it......all of them in the sack...no sasuke!
NO SASUKE! *throw hands in the air* Tired of that threesome and no kakashi! Now this I like<3
you are awesome for even making this. I definatly love the whole fuck that teme parts as well as how open minded and twisted the lemon was.
mmm....kakashi-sensei was....pretty hot. And sai was finally in a threesome lemon! About damn time
please make more
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh Jesus, sweet mother of Mary. This has to be paradise for me. Good Lord if only I was in Sakura's place. And you even included sweet, sweet yaoi. I have to say that I'm loving the characterization the most. Every single person, in my opinion, is perfectly perfect. And I'm seriously serious. I LOVE this story. It was so erotic and wonderful you had me panting (sorry for being so blunt, but it is a review and that's exactly what I did... maybe more ^_~)I also love the feeling of love between everyone. I hope that it all works out and that they DO NOT let Sasuke back in the group, cause I hate that little bitch. I just hope that he realizes what he's let go... Maybe they should do it at his house on his bed (cause they bought his place) just to rub it in. Anyways, I'm totally digging everything about this story. The expressions, the detail, the sex, the relationships. I, personally, would love to see more seriousness between Naruto and Sai (because that oddly turns me on the most, but only if Sai tops... that would be hilarious... Naruto boasting all the time and being topped by the stoic Sai XD) Anyways, I'll probably be happy anyway you write this, cause it's amazing! Remember to remind me when a chapter comes out, okay? I'll be anticipating another beautiful chapter. Oh, btw, Inner Sakura was probably describing me while reading this, haha. Can't wait for more!!
lovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard
lovelovelovelove,
stupefiedNarutard
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May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is perfect! Something original and witty, just what the readers need. Congrats on the fab story!
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay another awesome chapter!
and about sasuke. lol make him pay first and then dominate haha
and about sasuke. lol make him pay first and then dominate haha
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
whaddaya mean, constructive criticism? it's percect! it's just too perfect.. *stares off into space, thinking*
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting..... Very interesting.....
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, KakaNaru smut please. It makes my day! Onegai.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAGH!!!
thank GOD this thing has anon. reviews!
*flying tackle hug*
..i- i- aaah!! i can't come up with anything intelligible! this is GREAT!
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD!!
thank GOD this thing has anon. reviews!
*flying tackle hug*
..i- i- aaah!! i can't come up with anything intelligible! this is GREAT!
XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD!!
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was the best. You are a genius at writing. I don't even like Sakura, but I enjoy the story. Please hurry with the next chapter I can't wait to see Sasuke's reaction.
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May 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Bwahahahaa! GREAT! Oh man Naruto is such a freak-a-leek! He was giving Sai a Bj, groping Kakakshi's goodies, helping Sakura get some. It was crazy good! I liked it a whole bunch! I can't wait for more!
When Sakura was gushing geysers from her nose at Kakashi and Naruto's kiss, so was I!!! *Cleans off key board* GIVE ME MORE!!
When Sakura was gushing geysers from her nose at Kakashi and Naruto's kiss, so was I!!! *Cleans off key board* GIVE ME MORE!!