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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I must say, that third chapter was a delight to read; especially Kakashi's 'One down' remark. And
Inner-Sakura cackling was so right on!!!!!
I for one vote for Sasuke to rejoin team Kakashi, but as mentioned after much emasculating and self-effacement, of course! I'd love to see each person give Sasuke their own personal punishment- Sakura could spank his bare ass with her chakra enhanced strength (*slap!*) XD Perhaps she could even work in her fondness for leather! LOL
Inner-Sakura cackling was so right on!!!!!
I for one vote for Sasuke to rejoin team Kakashi, but as mentioned after much emasculating and self-effacement, of course! I'd love to see each person give Sasuke their own personal punishment- Sakura could spank his bare ass with her chakra enhanced strength (*slap!*) XD Perhaps she could even work in her fondness for leather! LOL
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May 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WOW, That was amazing. No constructive critisizm needed. Soooo hot and done really well. It was very natural and not rushed or anything.
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I loved that. I had to laugh so hard. I cannot wait to see what happens next!
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wowzers...Freaking GOOOD! I love it! Keep it coming Please!!
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, that was just too darn COOOOOOOOOOOOL!!! i am so glad sasuke is getting the tongue lashing he deserves ... stupid jerk! now, i'm guessing you'll have them make up eventually, but string him along for a while, 'k? i mean, don't let them just forgive so soon. let duck butt suffer ... and suffer .... and suffer! ahahaha!
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love love love this story. I have always hated Sakura throughout the show but Shippuden has gone and changed all that and Sakura has become someone powerful and strong inside and out and you've captured that perfectly. I love the team dynamics (I will always HATE sakura x sasuke but team seven has a special dynamic now that sakura has grown into her own that I really do love). You have all the characters in character and a sense of humour that I like. Ehh I'm rambling now but it's a great story and I thought you should be told.
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG this story WINS! Yes. FUCK HIM! It's about time someone wrote this fic! I am SO F-ing PROUD OF YOU!!!!!!!
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May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit! This is amazing! It's so well written; your style is really easy to read and engaging. And how you write the characters! I never really liked Sakura until she got over her fangirl stage and started kicking ass after the timeskip, and you really capture her well and how she relates to her new team in her new mature role. And bitch night XD How cute and utterly adorable. And then of course that last line had me all 'nyoro~n!' I hate cliffies! Can't wait until you update again and to see where you take this fic.
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*bouncers* ohhh this chapter was sooooo good, with sprinkles to. can i beg for more, i'd love a lemon, but with who, oh the choice. *smiles*
are you going to let them keep the cpmplex, maybe make duck butt pay them rent, oh the sweet irony in that.
*hands you cokkies* now i must go and poke my own muse, i wish you luck from one single mum to another, no matter what i will be here to read a gripping story.
are you going to let them keep the cpmplex, maybe make duck butt pay them rent, oh the sweet irony in that.
*hands you cokkies* now i must go and poke my own muse, i wish you luck from one single mum to another, no matter what i will be here to read a gripping story.
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May 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Wow, I cant believe they stood upto him like that. Sweet! And Yay for Lemons.