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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh can't wait for more chapters, it sounds great so far!!! Xxx
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You've got a gift with words, and I'm honored you've chosen to share it with us all.
Your characterizations are great, and I love the concept and how you used it to establish a workable premise, as well as humanize the characters beyond their already established limits.
Your characterizations are great, and I love the concept and how you used it to establish a workable premise, as well as humanize the characters beyond their already established limits.
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it you did a good job with little mistakes on the spelling I will love to see how you write out the sex screen