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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dude I love this story!!! i can't wait till you write the next one. :3
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July 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
for 'not being very good at it' you are quite good at writing lemons. i like how you have them interacting outside of just sex. and you are very good at keeping them from being OOC. i can't wait for the next chapter!
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July 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
well my goodness gracious....
i'm not really sure what to say....
well done? haha
I like it alot. im mean it's dirty but its still a very good story. i love the team dynamics between them. and i usually dont like when people write sasukes part because they rarely put him in character (aka a selfish jealous possessive bastard.... bu hey isn't that why we love him?) but you do it quite well i must admit. :)
you portray all o their characters exceptionally well indeed.
I'm hoping or a quick up date? Id like to see what happens. especially since they seem to have forgiven sasuke, or at least naruto has and thus everyone else will most likely shortly follow.
once again, excellent job, and can barely wait or your update.
peace
T-babe;]
i'm not really sure what to say....
well done? haha
I like it alot. im mean it's dirty but its still a very good story. i love the team dynamics between them. and i usually dont like when people write sasukes part because they rarely put him in character (aka a selfish jealous possessive bastard.... bu hey isn't that why we love him?) but you do it quite well i must admit. :)
you portray all o their characters exceptionally well indeed.
I'm hoping or a quick up date? Id like to see what happens. especially since they seem to have forgiven sasuke, or at least naruto has and thus everyone else will most likely shortly follow.
once again, excellent job, and can barely wait or your update.
peace
T-babe;]
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July 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All I need to say is "WOW".... and "MORE".....
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!
you are a VERY talented writer, even if ya have been doning this for like a very short while.
and yes, i LAUGHED like MAD! hubby REALLY thought that i had LOST MY MIND!............he was only half right.
i really love the way this story goes, just..........WOW!
thank you for writing such a FUNNY, fucked up, insane, wacked out bit of LAUGHTER!!
all of the chappies so far have been just.......AWESOME!
i really had to stop reading at like 1130pm last night so i could get some rest, BUT MY MIND WOULD NOT SHUT OFF! this is an way AWESOME story that had me thinking of some.....NEW SEX positions to try! *wink wink*
any ways i have ta go.
laters!
miko ~_^
you are a VERY talented writer, even if ya have been doning this for like a very short while.
and yes, i LAUGHED like MAD! hubby REALLY thought that i had LOST MY MIND!............he was only half right.
i really love the way this story goes, just..........WOW!
thank you for writing such a FUNNY, fucked up, insane, wacked out bit of LAUGHTER!!
all of the chappies so far have been just.......AWESOME!
i really had to stop reading at like 1130pm last night so i could get some rest, BUT MY MIND WOULD NOT SHUT OFF! this is an way AWESOME story that had me thinking of some.....NEW SEX positions to try! *wink wink*
any ways i have ta go.
laters!
miko ~_^
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July 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love ur story sry i havnt read it when you first put it out but its one of the betters ones i ve read
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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow. ^^. Hope to read from you soon. The temper tantrums are hilarious.
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July 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
YESSSS!!!!! I've missed this story, I'm so happy you updated!!! Thank you!
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June 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Really. I'm speechless.
I just hope you'll update soon. Maybe with a threesome with Sakura. I mean... two guys at once for her. My favourite ever!
I just hope you'll update soon. Maybe with a threesome with Sakura. I mean... two guys at once for her. My favourite ever!
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June 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OK! I need more because when I first started reading this, I couldn't stop laughing! They was mind fucking Sasuke so fucking well!!!!!!LMAO:)