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March 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story don't know if you'll see this but I'll say it anyway. Also glad to see that you're a Naru/Hina fan, and gotta say never thought of the Kiba/Anko connection. Still great frackin story. If you do happen to read this I do have a request I think you would do an awesome job with a Daria story preferably Daria/Jane. I know you probably haven't seen the show but I like it and I always thought those two made an awesome couple.
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August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ROFL
So Sexy.
So Sexy.
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story so far, though please do not let it be finished already. The idea of a KibaxAnko pairing is too good to0 be finished in two chapters. Please continue the story I beg of you
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude I loved it! The fight scene was pretty good and I loved Hinata kicking the crap out of the ninja that injured Naruto (BIG TIME!!!) I even loved it when Naruto clobbered the ninja leader.I was surprised by the way you had Hinata behaving in her scene with Naruto but I still loved it. So please one more chapter for this story? If not I understand but still you did a great job.
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June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic. Sounds interesting and the Anko/Kiba pairing is very new. You handle Anko's character very well too.
What's with so many authors not accepting anonymous reviews? I've had to register just to be able to review the stories I like.
What's with so many authors not accepting anonymous reviews? I've had to register just to be able to review the stories I like.
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May 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Possibly a good story. Your grammar is good and your story premise is original. I think this fic will be made or broken by how you do the second chapter. Update soon!
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you will continue this story as soon as possible because the idea behind it and the pairings within are very interesting
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May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool story so far dude! Hmmm sounds like a imitation of the Rasengan only with fire instead of air... Probably hurts like a B!#*) I can't wait for Hinata's revenge on the wantabe ninja's or Narutos' Kyuubi induced rage!!! Please more and soon!!!