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wow that was awsome .... please please update this storey i would love to read more and to find out what will happen next ... later for now

angel

Question! SO, after first admiting my only knowledge of japanese culture comes via manga and anime, there's something I've always wondered about. Could Sasuke adopt Naruto and Sakura into his clan, but not his family (obvious legal problem of incest)? That way, any child Sakura had would be an Uchiha, alibeit a bastard. And I know at least with old school european traditions if no clear lawful heir is available an heir can be designated, even if the person in question is a bastard or not closely blood related. If Sakura was adopted into the Uchiha's any child of Sakura's would be of unquestionable Uchiha decent and could simply be designated heir by Sasuke. If Sakura could not be adopted, then how about the child in question? Even if Sukura had to formally give up rights to the child to Sasuke, Sasuke could then recipricate by giving Sakura (and Naruto?) full power of atterney in absente over the child. I think either of these would pretty much avoid all the legal problems of the situation. Obviosly the social ramifications of would remain, but personally, I'd be willing to put up with a little social disapproval to be with the people I love. Oh, and if u haven't figured it out yet, I really like this story! Keep it up!

wow that was awsome .. love it and ihope they get to naruto in time to save him ... please please update soom i would love to read more .. later for now

angel

Kakashi was super cute ^_^ Perhaps there could be something about Sasuke's feelings and thoughts in the next chapter? Good luck with writing.

or just do stuff to prevent it, like start your car and move it a bit away from the house. this is what kept my family from getting the same treatment

We had a brush with C202 once, caused by our dryer. Those can be dangerous too. Pretty much anything that uses any kind of gas need a detector. Once the dryer was fixed our symptoms went away, and we later realized what nearly happened. We're much more careful now. Don't wait till something like that happens to you. Your friend was very fortunate. Most don't know what's wrong till they're in the morgue. Best wishes to your friend for a speedy recovery.

Gah! Another chapter and still no Naruto!! They need to find him! What will they ever do with out him. :(

It seems Sakura is more alone now than ever. Poor Girl. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Rox

I have really enjoyed reading this story. I hope Sakura and Sasuke find Naruto soon. But then you did warn that there would be character death so I doubt they will find him alive. But then, you might have some other character in mind that is going to be travelling to the great beyond. I doubt it's going to be Sakura since you don't write yaoi and she is pregnant after all. Anyway, I look forward to reading more of this story and I hope you update soon. Until then, great writing. :)

Poor Kankuro! He's going to be so dissapointed. This story really has me on the edge of my seat. Please update soon! And good luck with that whole TA thing!