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I liked Kakashi's musings, they were logical. But I'll cry for a week if you kill him. Kankuro was so damn cute in the latest chapter! Haa, got me smiling. Keep writing! I hope they do find Naruto, and I hope he'll live.

wow just wow i'm amazed that you have everyone in almost perfect charater. and you keep me wanting more! btw love the smut that was awesome. i can't wait for the update! :D

Great chapter. Keep up the good work! ^^

Another excellent chapter, I've been following this fic for quite a while now and so far there's almost nothing I could criticize about it - though in this chapter there was. I believe that according to the manga and anime fire jutsu is inferior to water jutsu, thus making it impossible for Sasuke to use katon against Kisame... or am I mistaken? I'm not entirely sure the same goes for mist, since it's not exactly water, but still... Anyway, otherwise a very dinamic battle and also I liked the idea about Kankurou liking Sakura... now there's a ship I hadn't heard about, although in this case it's obvious that there's no chance for Kankurou to win her heart... with two others in it, that'd be too much! Hope to see more of Naruto in the next chapter! Keep up the good work!

newest chapter seems so rushed and short... it kinda made my and my guitar gentle weep

i hope kashi doesn't have to die.

Oh noes!! What will Tobi/Mandara do with all that information!!! O_O


Keep up the great work!

I like the best the idea of "pretext"! And I love this story too. Mostly that Sakura not exactly a Mary Sue Character, much more human, than the usual Perfect Sakura characters. So please continue this too. I'm so anxious about Naruto! I like that you show us a semi realistic threesome, with the hard (emotional) part too. Its awesome, so keep up the good work!

Well if you already have it finished, then of course "My Own Worst enemy". It sounds fascinating. And after that well, that thrid one, the Sai/Sakura thing sounds quite the one at least I'd want to read too. Kakashi was quite cute in this chapter, I hope you update sooon and we'll get to know what has happened to Naruto! :) And btw. if you could add some space's between paragrapsh, the text would be greatly more enjoyable to read.

Uh-oh, teacher knows. Wonder what Tsunade's gonna do?