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i don't get why sakura would have any problems with her child being a "bastard"? they are ninjas for C's sake! no one cares about such things these days, not in reality and not in the naruto world. look at kurenai and asuma, they weren't married, but who cared? no one. please don't make a mess of the story by adding and making such a a big deal out of a stupid narrow minded way of thinking! i love the story and would hate for it to be ruined by that :P ... though I do know that it is up to you.

I loved it. I can't wait to find out what happens next. I don't know who to feel more sorry for. Great job.
Rox

I love this story! So please continue. I cant wait what will happen next!!

OMG! How could you stop here?! AAHH!! Please tell me you have surprises in store and Naruto isn't dead! It would be sooooooo sad if this is the death you warned us about! And the anime is called Naruto, he can't die!!
Ok, maybe I'm over-reacting,... anyway... I love that story and can't wait for your update!

Overall, it's a good story. I can't see a threesome working with the characters' personalities, but I can understand Kishimoto's perspective with that one. I also am not overly fond of lemon, but I can deal when I can skip it. For SecretQuill, unless you yourself are a mother, you have no idea what you're talking about. It's hard enough to rear a child with a spouse; alone would make things exponentially harder. Also, the term you are looking for is "narrow-minded" or perhaps "closed-minded"; and, no matter what you think, people always do care. Take Naruto for example. His ostricization is not soley due to the Kyuubi, but also because no one knows who his father is. If they did, there is no way they would be so rude to a Hokage's offspring.
Finally, if you pay attention and read the manga, Asuma and Kurenai are married. Please note the ring on her left hand.

I knew that was going to happen (the pregnancy part). At least I hoped. I didn't see Naruto being captured though. Great job. I loved the fact that she was in panic mode. Who wouldn't be? I can't wait to read what happens when Sasuke and Naruto find out.
Rox

hey :o that's a very old fashioned way of thinking... about the "bastard" kid and having a child out of wedlock!! and furthermore; they are living in a ninja village, why would anyone care about that? look at asuma and kurenai, that's a proof no one cares about it!
please don't make them so simple minded

I loved it. I feel so bad for Naruto. I'm curious to read what happens between them next.
Rox

Very good. But i would have liked to see more MMF. Perhaps some NaruSaku too. Otherwise, very well written and the writing style is a pleasure to read. Bravo

I loved it. Nice Sasu/Saku action. Hopefully Naruto will bet his chance soon.
Rox