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June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm really loving this. I can't wait to find out her decision.
Rox
Rox
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I think either tsunade, jiraiya, kakashi, or iruka should die. Someone close to all three of them so that it can bring them closer together like give them a reason to all be together. I really like this story. I love all three of them together cause its so rare to see it and I think you do it well. Can you space out the paragraphs cause they're hard to read but overall an excellent start.
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June 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing beginning ^^ I hope to read more soon!